Chapter 319 318 Taoli Chunfeng A glass of wine, Jianghu Yeyu ten years of light
After her husband finished speaking, Song Tangtang suddenly jumped on him, held his head with both hands, and rubbed his hair vigorously "Minghua , What are you thinking of something weird? "
"Don't touch a man's head and a woman's waist!"
"Ouch. Be careful. I'm crushing your belly!"
The couple played around for a while, and Fang Minghua sat down holding his wife: "Okay, let's stop making trouble. Wouldn't it be more interesting to divide the stages based on the strength value alone? ”
"Well, it's quite novel. So, if Guo Jing were to be in your book, what rank would he be in?" Song Tangtang suddenly winked playfully.
“This?” Fang Minghua pondered for a moment before saying: He can only be regarded as a second-grade little grandmaster, right? "
"How come such a powerful character is not even considered a first-class character in your novel? "
"So, I call the martial arts world created by Jin Yong the low martial arts world, and mine can be called the middle martial arts world. There is no analogy. "
"Is there still a world of high martial arts? ”
"Of course. For example, blowing up a planet with one punch can be called the world of Gaowu." Fang Minghua answered seriously, but Song Tangtang bent over with laughter after hearing this.
"Destroy the planet with one punch? Is that still a human being? Who wants to read bragging novels like that?"
Hehe.
More people will like to see it in future generations.
But Fang Minghua didn’t say this.
When I got home, of course I had to go back to visit my parents, and then I sat at the house of my father-in-law and mother-in-law for a while. After dinner in the evening, I drove home and walked with my wife for a while. After Fang Minghua went home to his study, he started to prepare to write this novel.
Honestly speaking, there is still a certain gap between this novel by Later Fenghuo and Jin Yong's, but he is better in creating a martial arts power system that is not available in this era, and in creating a temple world. world.
Just like the martial arts films in Xiangjiang, from the fist to the physical, the iron bridge and horse walking to the smooth, elegant and elegant fighting scenes filmed by Tsui Hark at the end, the latter is just a pleasure to watch.
So, we must highlight the characteristics of this Chinese martial arts world.
In addition, there are also some problems with the technical structure of the original work "Swordsman in the Snow".
There is so much the author wants to write about.
Not only can’t you forget the tension in the Jianghu market, but you also have to write about the corpses on the battlefield at Hulukou and Baopingkou. You have to write not only about the intrigues in the temple, but also about the stories of one city and one place. Gains and losses, you have to write about the growth and changes of the Northern Liang prince, and the childhood sweethearts in the East, West, and South. You have to write about the confrontation between heaven and man, and the disputes between Confucianism, Taoism, and Buddhism. You want to write too much, and the number of words is as high as 4 million words. What follows? There is also the suspicion of being unfinished.
If some of these things are appropriately discarded, the first half is about Jianghu, so write about Jianghu carefully, and the second half is about battlefields and world affairs, and all layouts are well laid out.
Whether it is the world of the market or the world of heroes, get rid of irrelevant things in a certain part. If it is not necessary, do not change the perspective or express another branch. The viewing experience will be much better.
And the number of words can be greatly reduced, 2 million is enough.
Let’s start making the outline again.
Fang Minghua read the book "In the Snow" several times before coming to this era in the future. He also watched the web series. I can still remember the general storyline and some very exciting passages. , just like the passage against Huang Ying in Xiangjiang.
Enough.
There is no need to completely copy the words and sentences of the steward, and it is impossible to remember them.
It has been six years since he came to this era. He has read many classics and written many things. He is still very confident in his writing skills when writing a book he has read before.
What is needed now is to write a good outline and streamline the original text.
Fang Minghua has been busy with this recently, writing more than 10,000 words in outline and details alone. Fortunately, I have the Great Wall 100 computer given to me by the Japanese, so typing on the keyboard is not difficult.
"Minghua, don't stay up late, go to bed early."
Song Tangtang took a peeled apple into the study room. It was already past eleven o'clock in the evening. Fang Minghua sat down Still coding like crazy in front of the computer.
Fang Minghua took the apple handed by his wife, took a bite and said: "You go to bed first, I will come back later."
Looking at the dense Chinese characters on the screen, Song Tangtang said with a smile: "Why do I feel that you write Martial arts, you are more motivated than you are when you wrote the award-winning "Crossing the Guandong"."
"A glass of wine with peach blossoms and spring breeze, and ten years of light in the rainy night in the rivers and lakes." Fang Minghua recited a poem by Huang Tingjian and looked at his wife: " Every man has a dream of being in the world. In reality, he can’t go to the end of the world with a sword, so he can realize it in novels.” A cup of herbal tea, and then he gently closed the door for him.
Fang Minghua crazily coded, and it took only half a month to complete the content of 100,000 words. A thick package was printed on both sides, and Fang Minghua immediately went to the post office and mailed it.
Luo Bin from Xiangjiang is looking forward to it.
Just last week, his old rival, "Martial Arts and History", a magazine under "Ming Pao", launched Wen Rui'an's latest martial arts novel "The First Part of the "Speaking of Heroes: Who is the Hero Series: Gentle Knife" .
The novel tells the story of Wang Xiaoshi, who is inexperienced in the world, and he meets Bai Choufei, who has similar interests and wants to go to Beijing to conquer the world together. The two men, each with their own martial arts, go to Beijing together with the daughter of "King of Luoyang" Wen Wan, Wen Wenwen. The story of
"The so-called true nature of a hero is that it is only when darkness comes that he draws bright and bright light from the sky. Only in the dead color can he become alive. Therefore, there is no desperate situation , there are no heroes; without mortals, heroes cannot exist."
Wen Ruian wrote such a story.
The novel is only the first 10,000 words of the serialization, and it immediately set off a craze among readers. This issue of "Martial Arts and History" magazine was sold out.
Luo Bin was anxious.
In the office of Universal Publishing House in Sheung Wan New Street, Hong Kong, he picked up the phone on his desk and called Zheng Zheng, the editor-in-chief of "Martial Arts World".
"Old Zheng, have you sent Mr. Zhang's novel?"
"Not yet, I'll call to urge you."
"Okay, tell him to hurry up."
Luo Bin put down the phone, leaned on the boss's chair and sighed deeply.
The Mr. Zhang he is talking about is Taiwanese martial arts writer Zhuge Qingyun, whose real name is Zhang Jianxin. He is one of the "Four Heavenly Kings" and "Three Musketeers" of Taiwanese martial arts. He is currently writing a new work "Wanli Jianghu" .
In fact, he didn’t need to push him at all. Among the famous martial arts novelists in Taiwan, Zhuge Qingyun was the most moral and ethical, never paying advance fees, let alone delaying manuscripts.
We are all old friends, and Luo Bin would not easily call the other party to urge him to write.
He was really anxious this time.
When it was almost time to get off work, the office door was knocked open, and Zheng Zheng walked in hurriedly, holding a large pile of manuscripts in his hand.
"Mr. Zhang has sent me the manuscript?" Luo Bin was suddenly shocked.
"It's not Mr. Zhang, it's Mr. Fang from the Mainland." Zheng Zheng looked a little weird and handed the manuscript to Luo Bin.
It is "The Fighting Swordsman in the Snow"!
(End of this chapter)