The first volume has been revised, and the entire copy of "Carnivore" has been rewritten, which makes me feel comfortable.
In fact, I have wanted to rewrite "Carnivorous" for a long time. This copy is very poorly written and has been a thorn in my heart for a long time.
During the writing period, I had an operation and met the master of river crab. As a result, many of the original ideas could not be used, and the overall presentation effect was messy. I directly made "The Pose of the Three Rivers" to the point where I was worried that it would not be put on the shelf if I delayed it. The first order was only 700 The results are neither good nor bad.
In the later period, due to lack of ability and being timid, I always only made changes on the original basis without having the courage to break and build again. Although feedback from new readers has shown that later versions are no longer so abstract, they are still not impressive (mainly because of me). I) satisfied.
Now I finally gritted my teeth and rewrote it, and gave a presentation that I thought was good, which can be regarded as removing the thorn in my heart.
Next, I will mainly modify the part where Chang Xu appears (he was offline earlier than expected, resulting in the character arc not being presented, and the entire line related to him had to be reorganized), and then "Hopeless Sea" and "Double Happiness" Town", "Frog Hospital" and other generally low-rated copies. It’s definitely too late to rewrite. I’ll probably revise it until the 25th, so I’ll put it aside for the time being and continue to save the manuscript for “Beware the Rabbit” so that I can struggle again in January. (I still can’t bear to cut it off, and I still can’t bear to finish it. I really want to write the rest of the plot, but I’m really afraid that no one will read it)
The second volume is also planned to be rewritten in its entirety, but will be placed after the completion of the fourth volume. Alas, it is a big project. (End of chapter)