Chapter 704 Poetry
“Lyrics are actually similar to poetry, and the most important thing about poetry creation techniques is to create a syntactic ‘strangeness’.”
“For example The famous "Spring River" "Flowing frost in the sky, invisible white sand on the beach". According to your way of understanding, the subject of the first sentence should be "floating frost", and the subject of the next sentence should be "white sand"? "Isn't it?" Wei Fei asked.
“Of course not!” Zhou Zhi said with a smile: “The subjects of the upper and lower sentences are actually the same...”
After speaking, he pointed towards the moon in the sky: "Moonlight!"
"So the correct understanding of these two poems should be that I can only feel the frost flying in the sky, but I can't feel the moonlight flying; Ting Only the white sand can be seen, but the real work The moonlight of the light source cannot be perceived visually."
"Comparing the sentence "The moon shines on the flowers and the forest are all full of sleet" with the sentence "The river and the sky are all the same color without dust", you can know why the poet. It should be written like this: If we are in Entering the flower forest under daylight, if you can find fine dust in the air..."
"Tyndale phenomenon!" Wei Fei from the science dog opened his mouth: "Then what we see are beams of light. It is the largest of sunlight and moonlight Difference!"
"That's it!" Zhou Zhi said with a smile: "So it makes sense for Zhang Ruoxu to dominate the entire Tang Dynasty. After correctly understanding these two poems, will the artistic conception and Zen meaning come out at once?"
Friends here have all read "Spring River Flowers and Moonlight Night", but they have not been able to appreciate it as deeply as Zhou Zhi. Now after Zhou Zhi touches it, it is like a dusty and exquisite cultural relic that has been wiped and cleaned, revealing its true nature. The appearance is ordinary, and people can't help but exclaim at its beauty.
"The light is flying in the sky, and the white sand on the terrace is invisible..." Feng Xueshan murmured: "It's so beautiful..."
"So this description that does not follow conventional grammar, It is very common in poetry. When it comes to the lyrics we are discussing now, "The blue sky matches the sunset on the chest", which matches the next sentence "Colorful clouds are the clothes of the sunset". , comparing the sky to a well-dressed girl. "
"The east is still blue, and a cloud reflects the light of the setting sun, just like the girl is wearing a blue top with a pin on her chest that reflects the setting sun. Brooch. ”
“And the west is full of sunset, and other clouds are filled with rays of light, just like the girl’s colorful skirt.”
"It seems like a sick line, but even people who don't understand poetry will find it very beautiful when singing it. Ignoring its shortcomings is precisely the subtlety of the lyrics, because its 'sickness' is to activate our own Where we associate, let us figure it out through our own brains To make up for it.”
“This is the reason why many poems are obviously faulty, but we only feel their beauty but not their sickness.”
“A lot of them? Are there many examples?" Zhang Xinyi was curious: " Can you list a few more for us? "
"For example... after the floating clouds parted, the flowing water lasted for ten years. It means that after the floating clouds and flowing water parted, the floating clouds and flowing water were common for ten years, but you couldn't see them. Every time like this, I will think of You."
"Another example...the green mountains in the two places are the same as the clouds and rain, and the bright moon has never been the same. What about two places? ”
"Another example is 'The mountains end with the plains, and the rivers flow into the wilderness'. In fact, it is more correct to say 'the mountains follow the plains, and the rivers flow into the wilderness'. But when the word order is changed, the strangeness is gone, and the poetic meaning is gone."
"Another example is 'Knowing that there are children picking weaving, the fence falls late at night and a light turns on'. It should be the other way around, late at night the fence falls and a light turns on, and there are children picking weaving, the cause and effect relationship is correct, but this way the logic The relationship is right, poetic It's gone too."
Jiang Hongxing couldn't help but laugh: "According to Zhuzi, all you need to do is reverse the order of daily speech, and it will become a poem?"
Zhou Zhi said with a smile: "That's about right."
"Then I'll have an elbow. Well, let's just say that the moon is good tonight, there are guests here to talk about poetry, and even the dog went to bed a little late. .”
"Behind the bright moon, the sound of poetry is heard. The fragrance is slow tonight, and the yellow dog has not yet fallen asleep." "Gee..." Before Jiang Hongxing could laugh, Zhou Zhi had already finished the poem according to his wishes. , the laughter suddenly got stuck in his throat and turned into a weird sound.
“Bah, he’s done it again.” This was originally Yan Xiao’s mantra, but now it was said by Feng Xueshan, but with that fake and low smile, the misty and charming look was She looks pretty, but is 10,000 times prettier than Yan Xiao.
"Everyone Remembers the Lyrics" ended soon after. Aunt Jiang cut watermelon for everyone, lit mosquito coils around it, and then went back to the house with Jiang Hongxing to rest.
The friends had finished chatting, so they put on light clothes and long trousers and went to the patio to continue playing.
The topics gradually became confusing, including pop songs, TV series, Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck, Zhengda Variety Show, Jackie Chan's "Double Dragon Club" and "Drunken Master 2", Jet Li's "Swordsman".
There is also Zhou Xingchi, who is very productive this year. He released "The Deer and the Cauldron 2", "The Deer and the Cauldron 2", "A Happy Event in the Family" and "The Military Champion Su Qier" in one go. Entered the forefront of the box office.
It was from this time on that the saying "Only Stephen Chow can beat Stephen Chow" became popular.
Gradually, the topic spread, and fewer and fewer people participated in the chat. The reason was simple. Some people were sleepy and went back to their rooms to sleep.
In the end, only Zhou Zhi, Yang He and Feng Xueshan were left in the yard.
Zhou Zhi understands Feng Xueshan's mentality. She is about to go to work in Manzhou, and the good days of running around are coming to an end. She may not see Zhou Zhi and others for a long time, and even if they meet again, her mentality may not be the same again. It's like this now, so it's hard to let go.
Zhou Zhi also doted on her and kept drinking and chatting with her.
The only thing that hurts Yang He is that he and Zhou Zhi share a dormitory. Now Zhou Zhi is holding him back from sleeping, so he has no choice but to take a nap on the recliner.
It wasn't until the dew began to come up that Zhou Zhi pitifully said again: "How about we come here? Isn't it in Manzhou? How far away is that?"
Feng Xueshan was even more pitiful: "But I will have no summer vacation from now on."
"Why are you pretending to be pitiful? There is no summer vacation but also annual leave. How free is it for your company?"
"The last question is, do I still need to practice my word?" Feng Xueshan said in a sarcastic tone.
"There is no need to practice deliberately anymore. Now you can apply what you have learned, and you can practice it in your daily work." Zhou Zhi said: "I have been a hammer on the door, but now I have entered the door. If I want to make progress, I have to Perform well in terms of work style.”
“Also. You have to get hard academic qualifications, whether it’s correspondence courses or targeted training. In your kind of organization, there will be many opportunities after you work. If you have the opportunity, you must fight for it.”
“By the way, speaking of writing. , I really have something to ask of you.”
"What's the matter?"
"A big thing, a super big thing related to the national economy and the people's livelihood."
"The national economy and the people's livelihood? I...what can I do?"
( End of chapter)