Chapter 29 A Divine Essay
There is nothing much to say about the exam process.
Qiao Yu just worked on the questions quietly, and after finishing them, he lay there quietly to catch up on his sleep. Hand in the paper early and stand out? Doesn't exist.
It’s rainy weather again today. I can’t stay in the examination room after I handed in my papers, and I don’t have anywhere to go. It’s better to stay in the classroom and sleep.
And Qiao Yu doesn’t like being in the limelight. Why would his classmates hurt his classmates?
Besides, if he thought it was cool to have good grades, his classmates would most likely not end up hanging around in Class 13.
In short, the first day of the exam was just an ordinary day for Qiao Yu.
But for the teacher, it’s another story.
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The Quanzhen mock exam is strictly in accordance with the high school entrance examination standards, including the test time. The test also officially starts at 9 a.m., and the test time for Chinese and mathematics is 120 minutes. Five minutes after 11 noon, Yuan Yuan got the class paper.
The class teacher immediately picked out Qiao Yu's paper from a stack of papers, and then threw the other papers aside.
The school-level mock exam correction requirements are not so strict. Although the papers are marked collectively, it doesn't hurt to pick out the papers first and take a look. Soon Yuan Yuan was immersed in Qiao Yu's answers.
Very good, all the questions on accumulation and application are correct, but this is normal.
These are just choices and fill-in-the-blanks. If you want to get high scores, these questions must be all correct. The highlight of the Chinese exam is always reading comprehension and writing.
Not to mention the 50 points for the big essay, the short essay expression alone accounts for a full 16 points, and the total score for the most basic accumulation questions is only 18 points. Similarly, reading comprehension also accounts for 46 points.
Before reading the big composition, Yuan Yuan was very surprised by Qiao Yu's reading comprehension. The accuracy rate was almost 100%, especially when many articles were selected from extracurricular readings, this was even more commendable. .
Of course, that doesn’t mean that Qiao Yu’s answers are exactly the same as the reference answers. In fact, for this kind of formal reading comprehension test, not only the reference answers are given, but also the scoring principles are given.
For example, if you answer something, you will be given as many points as possible. If all the key points in the scoring principles are not mentioned, it will naturally be zero points.
But generally speaking, it is difficult to get full marks for reading comprehension. After all, students cannot fully understand the intention expressed in the article, and it is easy to make mistakes and omissions. However, if you want to get no points at all, you will not get full marks unless you completely miss it. Put pen to paper, otherwise it would be difficult.
This is why it is almost impossible to get full marks in Chinese, and it is actually quite difficult to fail.
Not to mention the extremely subjective killer weapon of composition.
Okay, the composition...
Yuan Yuan suppressed the excitement in her heart and looked at Qiao Yu's composition. The composition was quite satisfactory.
The essay questions in this mock test are in the form of two choices. The first question is about that different true feeling, and the second question is about reading a piece of material and writing an essay according to the requirements.
Obviously the former has a higher degree of freedom and has slightly higher requirements on students’ composition ability.
Qiao Yu chose the former. The beginning of the essay is as follows:
"Last month during the Qingming Festival, it rained slightly in Star City, so it was not suitable to go out. But at my strong request, my mother agreed to take me to the XX Cemetery to pay my respects. Father.
There are many people on the mountain, Fortunately, civilized memorial service has been deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. Compared with previous years, there are fewer firecrackers and the scent of sandalwood filling the cemetery. More people choose to express their condolences with a simple bouquet of flowers.
This is a good trend, but I don’t like it, In fact, I have always preferred to use the traditional memorial method. When the light and shadow of the burning paper reflect the light and dark in front of the grave, I always feel that the paper money carrying blessings and memories can really cross the yin and yang and be passed to the world of the deceased... …”
Next is Duiling Various descriptions of the garden, as well as some people and things he met during the sacrifice process, the author related these emotional stories to the nostalgia for his father, and combined the yearning for father's love of a young man who lacked his father's company. , his deep true love for his father was vividly displayed.
The Chinese teacher unconsciously thought of Qiao Yu, a child from a single-parent family, and his eyes were filled with mist. And this essay also meets the requirements of the topic very well. Junior high school students can write about true love, maternal love, fatherly love, or friendship between classmates. Of course, for the high school entrance examination, it is best not to touch love.
Not to mention that the writing of this essay is smooth and sincere. As long as you don’t look at the unpleasant handwriting, Yuan Yuan feels that it is no problem to get a high score.
But the most amazing thing is not the article itself, but the last paragraph of the composition, which is a stroke of genius!
“Yeah, I suddenly remembered that my mother once told me that my father ran away before I was born, went abroad with my family, and was never heard from again. So in fact, I don’t have a father. , but no one can deny that this is a different kind of true love, right?”
God, this is also a different kind of true love...
It made her cry enough, and then suddenly made a 180-degree turn at the end? I don’t know where your father is, so you go to a cemetery to pay homage to him on Qingming Festival? ! No wonder XX, which represents the name of the cemetery, was directly used in the composition...
Really, the last sentence was so sublime that she didn’t know how to evaluate the composition. It felt a bit like a filial piety.
From the perspective of traditional Chinese cultural sentiments, the article is obviously deviant.
But if she is really asked to give the score, full marks must be full marks!
Even though the handwriting was a little sloppy and ugly, Yuan Yuan felt that she couldn't get over the hurdle in her heart even if she didn't give full marks based on the concept of the writing and the level of relevance to the topic!
After reading the composition, Yuan Yuan picked up the paper and walked out of the office. She went directly upstairs to the office of another Chinese language group in the third grade of junior high school, knocked on the door and entered.
"Teacher Xing, are you busy? If not, come and read this composition?"
Teacher A senior teacher with ten years of teaching experience and the leader of the Chinese teaching and research group for the third grade of junior high school. Currently, he only teaches Chinese classes for classes one and two of the graduating class at the school.
It’s hard work, but the treatment is also excellent.
There is no way. Over the years, outstanding teachers in ordinary middle schools have been stared at by many private middle schools with deep pockets. Poor treatment can indeed easily lead to brain drain.
"Who is Qiao Yu in your class?" Xing Yuandi asked.
It can be seen that Qiao Yu's name is indeed very popular in Tieyi Middle School these days, and all the teachers specializing in fast classes have heard of it.
“Yes.” Yuan Yuan nodded.
Xing Yuandi put down what he was doing, took the paper handed over by Yuan Yuan, and placed the composition page on the top.
"You have to practice this word carefully, otherwise you will suffer a lot." Lao Xing glanced at the composition and muttered immediately.
Yuan Yuan smiled sheepishly.
There are actually two characters in her class that are really good at writing, but it’s a pity that Qiao Yu is not among them.
Xing Yuandi could not say anything more. He knew better than anyone what the situation of Class 13 was, but he quickly ignored these details.
Considering that a child from Class 13 could write such an essay, it was really amazing, until I saw the last paragraph...
Xing Yuandi looked up at Yuan Yuan blankly.
"Real story?"
"Well, it must be true that there is a single-parent family without a father. But I don't know if it went abroad. I feel that this is too close. Did you finish the question? ”
(End of this chapter)