Summary at the end of the paper and asking for a day off
The fourth volume, which started on October 10th, has lasted seventy days and ended with a total of 410,000 words of Blood Diamond.
On average, 5,800 words are updated every day. Hmm... It's a slight step back, but overall it's still passable. Beauties, please stop spreading rumors about me. How can I tell you this?
Having said that, I wrote the first half of Blood Diamond very smoothly and was very satisfied with it, but it started to feel a little rushed in the middle. On the one hand, I felt that the pace was too slow, and on the other hand, I felt bored while writing it and fell asleep... But overall, I feel like I wrote it more smoothly and better than Obsidian.
Out of ten, I think it would be a seven.
However, when I read the previous article, I did find a lot of problems, including too few player appearances, Rafa's death being too hasty, and some plots being too dry...
More than one beauty has reported that the plot written by Luo Luo is too tight, too hasty, and looks tiring... Speaking of which, it may be that my subjective thinking is too strong. After all, when I was reading the book before, I encountered long paragraphs of hydrology. I will be very disgusted. When I write the plot, I will always think about whether it can be water-text or water-text, and try my best to have something to read in every chapter.
But now it seems that many things are like [a juggler], too much is not enough. You should learn to make trade-offs and master the balance... before you can become a qualified novelist.
If you have any suggestions or comments, please leave a message and let me know. Readers’ interaction is also the fuel for my progress. Thank you.
Back to the story.
What satisfied Luo Luo the most in this volume was actually the death of Baierswolf.
Because this was already written in the original outline...even the Black Knight was originally supposed to die in the previous volume, but finally survived to this volume.
For this role, Luobo even wrote a biography for him, but maybe due to his poor writing skills, he was unable to write touching stories and lines...
Version 1.0 is over. The next step may be a version transition period, or it may be version 2.0. I haven’t thought about it yet. I’ll have to wait until tomorrow to think about it.
My status has been up and down over the past two months, and I would like to apologize to all the beauties who have been following me.
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Finally, Luo Bao asked everyone to take a day off to prepare the outline of the fifth volume.
I won’t give too many previews here, because the plot has not been sorted out yet, but the general direction should be that a high-ranking member joins the team. Jack begins to prepare for promotion to a saint, and gradually unfolds more world views and maps.
Finally, I would like to thank all the beauties for your support. It is you who allow Carrot to eat this meal.
The current book's average subscription is 4,500, which is more than double the 1,830 first subscription when it was first put on the shelves. Thank you very much.
There are also two new alliance leaders in the past two months, which have added a lot of motivation to Carrot.
However, extra orders may not be available within a short period of time, so I’m very sorry.
Let’s continue working hard on the next volume! Carrot Ball December 19, 2022 22:13
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