Summary of steamed buns
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This first roll of steamed buns is finally finished.
Well...actually, there is quite a lot to say.
First of all, in terms of plot, this is my setting for this book. Because I am a semi-technical writer, I have had several versions of settings before.
The first version is equipped with a system and relies on the system to give rewards to advance the plot.
But after some understanding, I found that although it is okay to reward things such as "EUV lithography machines", it would seem particularly ridiculous if it is practical.
As I said in the article before, if Lu Yao told Huawei at this time that you should choose the MAIL architecture instead of the GC architecture, then Huawei's first reaction would definitely be to call the police.
Because the design of each chip is top secret within the company, and outsiders cannot know it at all.
But at this time, Lu Yao suddenly produced a photolithography machine drawing. It was really explosive...
So, I gave the system a PASS.
As for the second edition, just study Ba Wen normally. The top student relied on his own excellence to directly enter the campus, and his roommate was Xu Ruochen. Xu Ruochu came to see Xu Ruochen, and Lu Yao got to know her, and then started to extend downward from this entry point.
Frankly speaking, the advantage of this version is that the story is short and fast, the entry point is easy to cut into, and the plot does not drag out.
But the shortcomings are equally obvious... There are many people writing this model. And as an urban novelist with a background of 20 million words, these passages... I am really tired.
Originally, I told everyone at the end of "Director" that the next book will not be about cities, but about temples and rivers and lakes. Because I have really written enough about the city...
But then I came back after writing more than 100,000 words of useless manuscripts in Miaotangjianghu. I felt that it was not working anymore and wanted to write about cities again. And now that I'm back... repeating the same old stuff, I still can't write anymore.
So, after thinking about it, I decided to slow down the pace and approach it from a pure "ordinary person" perspective.
A story about a reborn person from an ordinary family who changes his destiny little by little.
Actually...it might be better if you don't follow the rebirth stream. Of course, this is something I only realized belatedly after writing this first volume. But the game has already started, and both rebirth and non-rebirth have their own advantages, so there’s no need to worry too much about these.
As for this first volume... To be honest, I was quite nervous when I wrote it.
On the one hand, I was worried that the plot was too procrastinating and that the 300,000 words had not yet gotten to the point.
On the other hand...maybe it's because I wrote too much? There are too many plots that may not have been written yet. When I had planned them in my heart, I entered my fatigue zone.
I feel that this kind of plot is very boring, so I can only redesign it.
Then I kept thinking about one thing, and that was...what was missing from Bai Fumei on the top floor.
In fact, between the two characters of Xu Ruochu and Hu Li, I was most inspired by Li Fuzhen. The first failed marriage experience of this Samsung princess, and the story of He and Chen Baiqiang, the daughter of the gambling king.
While one person's marriage ended in tragedy, the other's spanned life and death.
But from my point of view, for people who are born with nothing lacking, what can really make their souls throb is, on the one hand, the sense of freshness, such as Li Fuzhen. On the other hand, there is a spiritual level of commonality.
Therefore, at the beginning, I still followed the traditional "fresh flow" in designing the heroine. For example, taking her to eat at roadside stalls, making her fall in love with ordinary people's lives, etc.
But this is too pale for the entire plot.
Just like Shuanghui's "ham slices" and real Liberian ham.
So, I chose this version.
But the disadvantage of writing this way is that the plot needs to be very slow and detailed.
There will be no obvious collisions among all the sparks that burst out. But it has to be like a trickle, in the objective distance between "by your side" and "not by your side", and only through the character's inner perception of the changes in external things can it really be drawn out.
Therefore, in these eighty chapters, you can see that the two heroines are beginning to throb in their hearts.
But... no one showed it. To put it bluntly, between the impulsive type and the rational type, I chose the latter.
In terms of money, Lu Yao may not earn more than their pocket money in this life.
However, when it comes to talent and soul appeal, no one is as good as him in the eyes of the two.
So, I chose such a writing method and plot structure.
In more than two months, all coincidences and non-coincidences were melted into Lu Yao's chips.
I wanted to design him as a person who weighs the world with his talent.
It is not a very traditional plot that uses foresight to make some big moves logically.
That kind of... business-type male protagonist can do that.
But a scientific research male protagonist would be very awkward.
Especially the chip industry.
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In my opinion, everything written in this volume is within the outline.
Everything that should be there is already there.
I can give a passing score of 60 points.
It's not too outrageous, it's brilliant, but all the threads have been laid.
Next, is the campus era.
The design inspiration of this campus era is somewhat nostalgic.
I graduated from high school in 2008 and experienced the college years. Some of the things I found very interesting during that era will be reflected here. At the same time, the business line will also start to launch.
As for the overall style of this volume, my self-definition is "just like a young boy who is a classmate, in his prime and high-spirited".
The word "excellent" will be used throughout this volume.
Just like when we recall the outstanding people we met and heard when we were students.
Even after a long time, I can still remember the shadows of those people.
Become a topic of conversation after dinner.
This is the style of the second volume.
Hope I can write well.
Thank you also for your support.
The fathers of Jiangshan can tolerate me and prevent me from doing evil in the world.
Come down to earth and bring you a good story to entertain you after dinner.
This is my original intention that has never changed.
Sincerely, I give you a hug.
I hope you all enjoy eating this "moon".
(End of chapter)