"Complete Commentary" and "The Imperial Examination"
Finished! Finished!
After insisting on writing for 536 days (with four days off), the book finally finished with 2.33 million words!
I feel that this ending is a perfect ending. Earth and Yang Yue have resolved most of the contradictions, become friends on the road of peaceful development, and embarked on a path full of hope.
As the savior of the two worlds, Ji Ming also went to the fore and achieved the achievement of "there is no savior in this world, nor is there a god or an immortal emperor".
As for the issue of the relationship line... wait for the extra chapter in the future, write an IF ending or something like that.
Since everyone has seen this, I believe everyone should be able to detect one thing, that is, my personal writing tendency.
I personally believe in the two theories of "the most magical thing is reality" and "the most weird thing is reality", so this book basically tells a "most exaggerated" plot story based on a "most perfect" logical basis.
The biggest example is that there is no power in this book that is completely clean. Not to mention the so-called positive forces such as the Glow and Holy Light Church, even the Yangyue Foreign Affairs Bureau has hinted at some internal problems, such as the relationship between the residents and the competition for merit. Classic.
I will continue to write like this in the future. After all, there is no filth, where can I come from? The meaning of the protagonist's existence is to penetrate all these teeth!
Here are three things, divided into three points.
——Summary——
Not easy, not easy, it is the first time in my life that I have written such a long novel.
So I am ashamed that this book must have made many mistakes during the writing process. I still admire you and saw it all the way.
How to say it, this book is a big start and a bad start.
Snake Tail, because this book currently has 44,000 collections, but the average order is only more than 600, and the reading is only single digits, which is very miserable.
There is no way, I want to make a living, even the beginning of the second is almost gone, to some extent, this is one of the reasons why this book will be completed here.
But after writing this, in fact, everything I want to express has been expressed, and the ending is explained, and it must not be considered unfinished!
Even if I continue writing, I just fill in the details of the last plot (watering), and add a branch line for Ji Ming to go to Lingxi.
Hutou, because when I first started writing, I thought it would be good if this book could be put on the shelves for 5,000 yuan, but the result was nearly 15,000 yuan.
There was a possibility of taking off, not to mention the tiger climbing a mountain, it would be a good product to make us a thousand-eight!
What a pity, because of the big failure in the second volume, the first order was 39, and the highest order was less than 800! It's a shame to this popular novel.
It’s still because I lacked the ability, so I didn’t have the shame to contact the editor for a whole year last year and wrote a book in a silence.
So since it is embarrassing, it means that there must be certain problems in this book. I must write a "Imperial Edict" here.
Just follow Robinson's format, and list all the strengths and weaknesses of this book that I believe are here.
Show it to yourself and be alert!
Let me show you, make up for it!
Then, the second point.
——Discussion on pros and cons——
【The biggest advantage: nonsensical jokes】
I like to write this, with exaggerated contrasts, outrageous writing, countless bad jokes, and the insertion jokes of the dictionary.
I believe that people who are willing to read this book also like it, at least they can accept these elements.
Very good, then I will continue to carry forward the next book!
【The biggest weakness: the fourth natural disaster】
I can tell you very responsibly that if this book does not have the Fourth Natural Disaster, I will follow the idea of Volume 1 to write about Ji Ming's outrageous adventures. Until here, the results will definitely be better than now.
Because I can see from the background that the first round of big rhythm and retreat of this book starts from the second volume, many people cannot accept that Ji Ming temporarily retreats to the second line and lets players play the leading role.
So I will definitely not write this in the next book, so I will still be able to write an outrageous adventure and leave the camera to the protagonist!
[Second strengths: the cooperative relationship between the protagonist and the plug-in]
Systems are either cold machines, inner demons of the protagonist's backstab, or mugwort... but in this book, the system, or the little boss, is a separate character.
It is the protagonist's first ally and the most trustworthy friend. It also serves as a ring grandpa, a plot commentator, and a plug-in joke performer.
I personally like the positioning of the little boss. This thing really reduces the difficulty of my writing and strengthens the performance of the program at critical moments.
I should continue this setting in the next book, but the new little boss should not be so flying. [Second shortcomings: plot arrangement]
In fact, the fourth natural disaster element itself is innocent, and this will make the biggest war criminal that will make this book unlucky.
I remember a reader asked me in the middle of the year if I had read any novels about the Fourth Natural Disaster theme, and I didn't dare to say anything at that time.
Then I'm showing up now, yes, I can say I haven't seen it ()
I just... want to write about the brothers, want to write some work... I arranged for the fourth natural disaster to enter the scene.
As a result, Bai Yesheng failed to create and was hidden for a long time. The weakness of the fourth natural disaster was superimposed on a heavy blow... Hey!
I don’t know if you still remember the second volume later, when I almost broke the day into day and night, and the map into Sunshine City and Dungeon, and wrote it in a scrolling day by day.
To be honest, looking back now, it was a disaster setting.
Although I did write down the early development context of the players and laid the main tone of "The Fourth God of Disaster Plan", the pace is too slow and too exhausting.
Not to mention two volumes, the three volumes have just been written for public beta, and the time in the book is not even as fast as in reality. It is really funny.
Even though I speeded up after that, as of the end of the book, I only wrote from the first winter to the third winter, which was barely faster than reality.
The next book will definitely not be like this. The writing is more concise and the plot is more linear.
[The Next Advantages: The Leader of the Messenger of Justice]
No mistakes, one song, one content, one in 6, one book, one bar, one reading!
I admit that I specially arranged a protagonist with a slightly twisted personality and behavior.
Ji Ming, a man who always does the softest things with the worst minds.
For the "protagonist", this is definitely not as good as killing. I think whoever is unhappy will be chopped up with one knife, it's so happy!
But for "everyone", Ji Ming is definitely someone who can make friends with confidence.
Just like in this book, none of Ji Ming’s good people and those who are good to Ji Ming have failed. As the Savior, he fulfilled all his duties.
I hope that after reading this book, you can remember Ji Ming, remember that there was once a book whose protagonist was an absolutely reliable and good person.
Living is very tiring, but doing things right, I am really running for all living beings, instead of cursing the sky and the earth at the beginning, I am full of resentment, but in the end I become a king and become a ancestor and become a new oppression.
The protagonist of the next book is definitely also a messenger of justice, but he will be more free and easy than Ji Ming, such as narrowing the scope of punishment and increasing the intensity of the criminal law.
In other words, it will be more "satisfactory", it is all the wisdom of our ancestors!
【The next weakness: character creation】
By the way, except for the protagonist, I have never heard anyone say that they like any of the characters in this book, which is too scary!
Not to mention anything else, I think as a second-handed prickly ape, I have already greeted all the cute spots I personally like to the female character.
So here is a small survey: which character you like most in this book and why-
[There may be many other things in this book, but I won't talk about the advantages and disadvantages that cannot be seen from my perspective]
Come on, write your thoughts here, I will read them all-
——Looking forward to the future——
Regarding the next book, I plan to take a break for the New Year and open a new book after the New Year, and this account or this taste.
But, this book is magical, so let’s write a fairy tale next time, just to share with you my good news about this topic.
Just try to use a new cup to install the optimized old bar! Hopefully the result will be better than this book (Pray).
Okay, there is nothing to write anymore, just like that. I should take a rest in order to get the manuscript all night long.
——2025.1.27, at home
(This chapter ends)