Final comment
It's finished.
I was really moved when I typed the last three words "The whole book is over".
Thank you very much for tolerating the poison spots I wrote to see now.
Recalling carefully now, it was indeed inappropriate to have a contact with Zhu Zhuqing in the early stage. The fusion of martial souls is indeed a reason, but the protagonist should not have reacted too much.
And it was written out suddenly without any preliminary preparation, which seemed too abrupt.
It gives people the feeling that the plot is designed for beauty, and it has some conflicts with the protagonist's character.
Be sure to pay attention to the next book.
From this book, I realized the trouble of many heroines. No, it should be said that there is trouble of the heroine.
So, there is no heroine in the next book!
If there is no heroine, I am not a fan of Douluo. I have already thought about what to write in the next book and I should turn to original.
I hope everyone will support you then.
Let’s talk about this book, it’s okay before. When I wrote the last volume, I became more and more biased. I didn’t even get the outline back, and the more I wrote it, the harder I could write it.
The writing experience is still insufficient and needs more training.
However, the pitfalls this book has gone through will not be repeated in the next book.
That's probably all I can say, there may be an extra. (Just possible.)
Py again at the end.
Douluo Peerless: Why did I become an evil soul master?
Douluo: The Peerless King of Beast Control
Douluo: The Peerless Lord of the Demon (New Book of Group Friends, Two Fans of Dou, Many Female Leaders, Daily Life, Genius, No System) (End of this chapter)