About the recent dragon volume (free chapter)
There is indeed something wrong with the writing of this volume.
①The upper limit of the dungeon is low. The dragon material universe can have the same effect on the protagonist as an ordinary universe.
②Protagonist’s character problem.
Watching The Dragon when I was younger definitely had an impact on me.
In addition, writing the three brothers and sisters such as Ling, Chu Zihang, and Genji after death..., emm, it is very likely to attract a lot of scolding.
The combination of the two makes the protagonist hesitate a little.
③Perspective problem.
I originally planned to try the group portrait writing method in the dragon dungeon to pave the way for the fish fry brawl in the next dungeon.
After all, there are seven fish fryers, and some of them are quite cruel.
Why do you stuff yourself into a cesspit in subspace, and I stuff myself into the Sword Realm, and the magnetic field guy crushes the destiny, and he's in the Mechanical Realm...
Unfortunately, the dragon dungeon pond is too small, and it is written as if the protagonist is amusing himself, which is not in line with the previous character traits.
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Solicitation of opinions
In the future Fish Fried dungeons, on the one hand, the main character becomes stronger through experiments and the whole life is closer to the diary flow of the Creator. You can refer to the rhythm of pages 144-145 of this book.
As for the high-end game of the Fish-Fried Brawl, it is more inclined to appropriate group portraits to depict the style of each Fish-Fried Guy.
What do you think?
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Solicitation of opinions 2
There are still 20 dragon scrolls originally planned.
If you agree to cut it into 10 pieces, post this chapter here and say,
I agree to post this section about cutting it into 5 pieces.
I agree to cut it into 2-3 pieces, and I will post a chapter about this section that will end tomorrow.
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It's my problem that this volume wasn't written well.
Don't make excuses or reasons, stand at attention when you are beaten.
Tomorrow (Friday), the day after tomorrow (Saturday), and the day after tomorrow (Sunday), 1.2k words will be updated for three consecutive days. (End of chapter)