Chapter 17 Full Score Essay
Under the attention of the whole school, Li Luo stood up from his seat.
Even though he already has 35 years of life experience.
But the experience of going on stage to receive an award in front of so many people was an unprecedented experience in my entire life.
Li Luo followed Ying Chanxi and passed between the seats of his classmates. He was still a little nervous and a little excited.
The feeling of adrenaline secretion, which caused a slight numbness in the arms and accelerated heartbeat, was really rare in Li Luo's life.
But when he looked ahead, Li Luo couldn't help but sigh.
As expected of Ying Chanxi, who has been weak since she was a child of winning awards. She goes on stage to receive awards and speak as if they were commonplace.
As a 35-year-old, I don’t have the high on-the-spot qualities of a young girl.
It's a bit embarrassing.
With this in mind, Li Luo also reshaped his posture, straightened his chest, and walked towards the stage with a calm expression.
There are eleven people in total, one more than the quota for outstanding teachers, but no one cares.
After reaching the rostrum, the teacher who arranged to take photos wanted Ying Chanxi to stand in the middle.
But Ying Chanxi stopped at the edge of the stage, squatted down and tied his shoelaces.
When she got up, ten classmates over there were already standing in a row.
So Ying Chanxi naturally stood next to Li Luo at the edge and took the certificate from the principal.
The two people got together and were imprinted in the group photo by the teacher who took the photo.
Among these eleven outstanding graduates, there are top players like Ying Chanxi and Liu Shaowen who have good academic performance and have won competitive awards.
There are also students who have participated in some sports, music, painting and other projects, and have won at least provincial awards.
In addition, there is also a classmate who did good things and was reported by local TV stations.
Therefore, Li Luo standing inside was not too obtrusive or conspicuous.
"How about this surprise?" Ying Chanxi asked Li Luo in a low voice with a smile when walking down from the podium.
"It's really a surprise." Li Luo nodded, still recalling the feeling of seeing the playground full of people just now, and felt a little overwhelmed for some reason, "My quota was added temporarily, right? There were supposed to be only ten people."
"How could you do so well in the high school entrance examination?" Ying Chanxi smiled and said, "I think it's quite appropriate." Li Luo shamelessly accepted Qingmei's compliment, and then said, "But I didn't even know that my composition got perfect marks."
"I'll go find Teacher Zhang after it's over and ask for your composition." Come and take a look." Ying Chanxi said as he walked, "In the past, your composition score was only 25 or 6, but this time it was so high. Zhao Rongjun's own composition didn't even get a perfect score. How could I teach you?" br>
"Maybe it's because I have a better understanding." Li Luotian said shamelessly, "The inspiration in the exam room has to get into my head, and I can't help it."
Full score in Chinese composition Things can only be said to be rare.
When Li Luo took the exam, he just followed the standard argumentative essay model of total score and copied three celebrity anecdotes in his mind that fit the topic, and paired each with a famous quote.
Then the three sub-arguments were summarized and finally synthesized into one big argument to complete the argument.
Add a few more sentences that seem to be more literary and youthful, and you have an 800-word high school entrance examination essay.
I don’t know how I got full marks.
Thinking about this, Li Luo followed Ying Chanxi back to his seat.
Zhao Rongjun, who was sitting behind him, stuck his head out, took the certificate from Li Luo's hand, and looked at it curiously: "I'm envious, I don't even have it."
"Humble, It's low-key, nothing to see." Li Luo took the certificate back and carefully laid it flat on his lap, "I have to show it to my parents when I get home, so don't get it wrinkled by me."
Before and after. Shao Heqi and Jin Yuting, who were sitting there, heard sour water rising from their mouths.
But Li Luo's score was indeed higher than them all, and the two of them couldn't say anything, so they could only hold it in.
Especially Jin Yuting, at this time, she thought that she might not be able to pass the score line of Attached No. 1 Middle School, while Li Luo had already successfully passed the exam.
Thinking again of the taunts I made to Li Luo before the high school entrance examination... Oh my god! What a shame!
Now Li Luo has even won the title of outstanding graduate, and he got it by relying on his ability in the high school entrance examination.
This was even more like a knife thrust into Jin Yuting's heart.
Jin Yuting is now embarrassed to talk to Li Luo and Ying Chanxi. She feels awkward.
Fortunately, Li Luo doesn't have the habit of settling old scores with children. If Jin Yuting and Shao Heqi don't talk to him, he must be too lazy to go out of his way to slap them in the face.
Now that I have received the certificate of excellence for graduates, the surprise that Teacher Zhang mentioned has finally settled.
As for what the principal said later, Li Luo didn't pay attention. Only when the principal announced the end of the graduation ceremony did Li Luo come back to his senses.
"It's already half past four." Li Luo glanced at Shao Heqi's watch, stood up and stretched, "Will you go directly to Jiangnan Restaurant later, deputy manager?"
"Ah , yes." Shao Heqi's reaction was a moment slow, he glanced at Li Luo and the certificate in his hand, then quickly looked away and responded, "Move the chairs back to the classroom, and then we can set off. It's just a few meters away from the school. A hundred meters away."
"I'll put this certificate in your schoolbag for a while." Li Luo turned to Ying Chanxi and said, "Be careful not to crush it. Give it to me when you get home at night."
"Got it." Ying Chanxi took the certificate directly from Li Luo's hand, stacked his own with his, and then said, "Then I'll leave my chair to you."< br>
Shao Heqi in front sighed, picked up his chair, his back became more and more bleak as he walked forward, and silently left with the team in front.
After everyone returned to the classroom and put their chairs in place, the head teacher Zhang Wei clapped his hands on the podium and motioned for everyone to look over.
“Let’s take a short break, and then we’ll line up to go to Jiangnan Restaurant with the classmates from Class 6.”
“There are some precautions that I need to explain to you in advance. Don’t Because I graduated, I ignored the teacher’s words.”
“We must line up on the road, pay attention to safety when crossing the road, and don’t run the red light.”
“We can’t do it after we get to the hotel. You know, you can only drink drinks.”
“Our class still has part of the class fee left, so Shao Heqi can just charge 30 yuan per person.” Actually, thirty yuan is not enough. , but Zhang Wei was happy to win the title of outstanding teacher, and he paid for the remaining money from his own pocket.
……
“Be careful and release slowly.”
Before departure, Li Luo stood beside Yingchan River and stared at She put the certificate safely into her schoolbag and nodded with satisfaction.
And Ying Chanxi did not forget to ask Teacher Zhang for Li Luo's perfect composition.
"Well, let me give this to you first." Zhang Wei went to the office and handed over a copy of the composition. Then he smiled at Li Luo and said, "Although I don't know much about composition, but you This article is really well written, I felt good while reading it.”
“Well, thank you, thank you.” Li Luo took his essay from Teacher Zhang and stuffed it into Ying Chanxi’s. In the school bag.
After all the students in the class were ready, Zhang Wei asked everyone to leave the classroom and line up in the corridor.
Nearly a hundred students from Classes 5 and 6, plus teachers of various subjects, walked out of the school in a mighty manner.
......
"What are you looking at? Be careful when you walk."
In the team of Class 6, Lin Yuan ranked first in the class this time. , reminded Hua Xiuxiu, who was next to her and got second place in the exam.
Hua Xiuxiu ignored him and kept her head down as usual, holding a piece of paper in her hand with a copied composition on it.
The title is "The world is warm and cold, you will know when you drink water".
"Just like a person drinking water, he knows whether it is warm or cold." Hua Xiuxiu pondered the origin of the title of the essay, and the more she chewed, the more it tasted.
After arriving at school this afternoon, Hua Xiuxiu asked her class teacher, Teacher Wang, to get some full-score essays from this year's high school entrance examination.
What she didn't expect was that one of them actually came from within their school, written by a classmate named Li Luo in the next class.
I have never heard of this name Hua Xiuxiu, and I have never seen this person appear in the school's outstanding essay award publication before.
This made her very curious.
So during the graduation ceremony in the afternoon, Hua Xiuxiu had already taken the time to secretly read this essay several times.
"Is this so good-looking?" Lin Yuan glanced at Hua Xiuxiu's pretty profile and said, "A perfect score in composition often depends on luck, maybe an idea comes to you in the examination room. If you ask the person involved to write it over again, you may not be able to write it so well."
"How come you haven't been lucky once in three years of junior high school?" Hua Xiuxiu glanced at him and met Lin Yuan's eyes. "Strength is strength. Didn't you see the graduation ceremony just now?"
"Li Luo, the guy in the next class who wrote this essay, originally only had a score of more than 400 points."
< br>"As a result, one month before the exam, the score improved to 555 points. Is this higher than both of our scores?"
"His perfect essay about interpersonal relationships may be his reflections on the interpersonal relationships around him when his grades were not good in the past?"
"Look at the last sentence of his essay. "
Speaking of this, Hua Xiuxiu's tone changed a little, becoming a little low and frustrated, and said: "Nature's warmth and coldness, play the role of spring, summer, autumn and winter, the flowers bloom and fade; the warmth and coldness of human relationships, push the cup towards the court. Change the lamp, and the lights will dim. "
"This sentence is not only well written, but also echoes the words of the Meteorological Bureau mentioned in the title of the essay. It can be said to be very relevant. "
"How could it be possible to write such a sentence during an exam on the spot and be summed up by just one sentence of luck?"
Hua Xiuxiu is usually a literary girl. She was born in a scholarly family since she was a child. It’s a lot of reading.
As a Chinese class representative, her Chinese scores are among the best in the school.
For example, in this high school entrance examination, the highest score in Chinese language at Yucai Middle School was 112 points, while Hua Xiuxiu was only one point lower, ranking second in a single subject in the school.
Li Luo, who scored 110 points, was third.
In addition, in the entire Yucai Middle School, there are no single language contestants with a score of 110 or above.
But for Lin Yuan, this was very uncomfortable.
Classes 5 and 6 usually have a good relationship, and the boys would make appointments to play basketball together.
Lin Yuan's height is a flaw, he has always been only about 1.65 meters.
That bitch Li Luo from the next class always blocked his shots when he was being watched, which made Lin Yuan angry every time.
Fortunately, my results are much better than him, and I can still be mentally victorious when losing.
As a result, this kid Li Luo actually made a huge comeback. He scored higher than him in the high school entrance examination and came back with a perfect score in his essay.
His Hua Xiuxiu was talking about Li Luo, Li Luo, Li Luo today, which annoyed him to death.
But Li Luo's perfect composition this time did have something to say, and Lin Yuan couldn't find anything to say, so he could only watch Hua Xiuxiu gloomily and admire it over and over again.
It wasn't until he arrived at Jiangnan Restaurant and sat down at the dinner table that Lin Yuan watched Hua Xiuxiu put away the essay in her hand, and he finally breathed a sigh of relief.
But by the middle of the meal, when everyone stood up with juice and went to the teacher to toast, Hua Xiuxiu suddenly stood up and asked Lin Yuan: "Who is Li Luo over there?"
"Ah?" Lin Yuan was stunned for a moment, and subconsciously pointed her in the direction. As a result, he watched Hua Xiuxiu holding the juice and walking straight towards Li Luo, "No, eh... wait a minute."< br>
Lin Yuan hurriedly followed him at a trot.
As a result, he saw Hua Xiuxiu walking up to Li Luo. After greeting him politely, he couldn't help but ask him: "May I ask about this essay you wrote during the high school entrance examination? At that time What's the idea or inspiration? "
This question was asked... Lin Yuan on the side covered his forehead, feeling embarrassed for Hua Xiuxiu.
But she is usually such a person. When it comes to things related to literature, she doesn't care about the opinions of the people around her at all. Lin Yuan can't say anything about this.
As for Li Luo, who was asked a question, he was looking at Hua Xiuxiu with a confused look on his face, and then responded casually: "Even if you are lucky and have an idea, you may not be able to do it again if you ask me to do it again." Written out, it’s not worth mentioning.”
It was obviously similar to the words he used to disparage Li Luo, but when he said it from Li Luo’s own mouth, Lin Yuan just felt that he was really showing off.
It would be great if he could have written this perfect composition!
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