Chapter 81: Comments on the launch
As the title says, it’s on the shelves~
This is the first time that Mengxin has written a comment on the launch, so let’s just say something from my heart.
When you read this chapter, you should read it with a tolerant heart. First of all, thank you very much for reading.
My collection has been growing a lot and I have a lot of comments, but the reading data is simply terrible. This also made me very embarrassed, and made me feel like I had bought it for collection, but I was really just a little street rusher who rushed to code DDL after get off work every day. So the recommendations haven’t been exhausted yet, so I might as well put it on the shelves as soon as possible.
However, this phenomenon also reflects the problem of this book, which is that people have no desire to read it, or there is not much enjoyment at all.
Looking back at these 180,000 words, the protagonist has not even grown much, and it has not brought much positive emotional value to readers so far. It is inevitable that there will be less follow-up reading.
What runs through these words is actually more like a self-pleasure I wrote for myself. There is a plot that particularly proves this point, and that is-Gu Yao forces the protagonist to admit his mistake.
What did I think when I designed this plot?
Probably it is from the perspective of a worker who just entered the workplace. One of your bosses accidentally misunderstood you, but he couldn't admit it because of his face, and you were so stupid that you went along with it and lost your own face to save his.
Because you feel that the face of a newbie like you is not valuable in the first place, and in your opinion, this boss is not bad, and he will definitely make it up to you in the future.
It definitely looks like a very cost-effective deal, but in reality it should feel a little bit more satisfying, right? But in a novel it's completely different.
This not only failed to establish Gu Yao's upright and upright image, but also did not make readers feel happy. Instead, they felt aggrieved. After all, no one comes to see realistic plots in Fantasy Cultivation.
It would be much better if I wrote that Gu Yao took the initiative to admit his mistake, and then everyone in the audience was shocked by the protagonist's astuteness: Gu Yao's image stood firm, the protagonist also gained recognition through the shock of others, and the readers also Can get a sense of refreshment.
So I am really a newbie. How could I write like this if I have experience? Even if it is written like this, Gu Yao should be written as a female character who can be conquered. Gentle readers must be willing to suffer a little for their wives. After all, everyone knows that sooner or later she will wear black stockings to compensate you~< br>
In addition, there are many unfamiliar aspects, such as the suspense revelation, character creation, etc. If you have any suggestions, you can mention them in the comment area. I will refer to them as appropriate when I see them. Will definitely improve. My dear readers, what could be a greater sense of pride than seeing someone else take your shape? (Wu Ju)
The style of the first volume is indeed a bit depressing, and it can be considered an attempt at my writing style, which will change later. If you are looking for the feeling of "Mom, I really can't tell the difference", I'm afraid you will be disappointed, because in my opinion, my protagonist has always been able to tell the difference clearly, but I just deliberately didn't write it out in the first few chapters. I promise, there will be more exciting stories in the future!
Thanks to all readers for their support, including but not limited to reading, comments, rewards, recommendations, monthly votes, etc. To be honest, I am flattered that anyone can read this book.
Thanks to my editor Liu Xingda. I am really a newbie. I don’t dare to join social groups, and I don’t pay close attention to teaching updates. It should be a headache to answer my questions hh.
Finally, let’s talk about the update. I will stay up all night tonight to write. I am one of those people who can’t even save a chapter of manuscripts. Moreover, typing is like a turtle crawling, and my head hurts every day.
I have already taken all the sick leave for next year tomorrow. I don’t care whether the bonus will be deducted or not. Let’s strive for more.
After all, I am a very mediocre person. Maybe the way to leave some traces on this world is to write a book, right? This was also the original intention behind my decision to write a book when I was hospitalized with appendicitis some time ago. (Although I have struggled on the verge of cutting the book many times hh)
The time is tentatively scheduled to be updated around 6 pm tomorrow. I hope everyone can support the first order and full order. I really don’t want my subscription ratio to be higher. It’s so ugly hh! ! !
Introduction We have a group, everyone is welcome to play.
(End of this chapter)