Chapter 26 Works of Cha Jianying
Zha Jianying was fascinated by the deeds of Princess Pingyang, especially the achievements she made with her husband Chai Shao. Sure enough, couples with the same goals are enviable.
At the beginning of the year, two wars were fought in the south. Many students were filled with indignation and wished they could go to the battlefield to kill the enemy. Although Zha Jianying is not as indignant as the men, if she can make contributions like Princess Pingyang, she will definitely be willing.
What’s more, it’s better to go with someone you like. Living and dying together, is there anything more romantic than this?
Cha Jianying is not a romantic person, but as a writer, she is born with romantic feelings.
When the time comes, she will command thousands of troops, and her he will charge into the battle, and the two of them join forces to kill everyone...
Unconsciously, Zha Jianying puts her face against Liu Hongmin’s back.
Liu Hongmin was stunned for a moment, and then continued to tell about Princess Pingyang.
"Unfortunately, because of jealousy of talents, a natural commander like Princess Pingyang did not have the opportunity to show her strength. Shortly after the establishment of the Tang Dynasty, Princess Pingyang passed away. The emperor of the Tang Dynasty, Li Yuan, gave him the posthumous title Zhao, which is the first time in history The first princess to have a posthumous title. At the same time, she was also the only woman in history to be buried with military honors..."
Zha Jianying was stunned, Princess Pingyang died like this? In her best grade, when even her talents were not fully revealed.
For a moment, Zha Jianying had mixed feelings in her heart.
She lamented the unfairness of fate. If Princess Pingyang had lived thirty more years, she might have grown into a powerful female general. At the same time, she also thought of herself. She had been hesitating before.
It was for Liu Hongmin to stay in China. The two of them ran a warm family. Although they were poor, they were very happy.
Let’s continue to choose to study abroad, open our eyes to the world, and find our own value in life.
And now, she vaguely answered.
In her opinion, choosing the first option would have a similar fate to Princess Pingyang...
Without words all the way, Liu Hongmin rode his bike to the girls' dormitory. Zha Jianying sent Liu Hongmin away and immediately turned around and went upstairs.
"Jianying, are you dating Liu Hongmin?"
Wang Xiaoping quickly came over and asked curiously.
Zha Jianying blushed and pushed her quickly, "What are you talking about? He wanted to buy a house but lacked money, so I helped him contact Ming Pao in Xiangjiang. After consultation, Ming Pao decided "Famous in the World" was published, so Liu Hongmin invited me to watch a movie to thank me."
Wang Xiaoping immediately caught the flaw in her words, "Come on, who would like to thank someone for inviting them to watch a movie? I can't say anything, so why not treat them to dinner!"
Zha Jianying's face froze. , she was thinking about watching a movie with Liu Hongmin at that time, and she didn't expect this at all. At this time, she remembered Liu Hongmin's expression at that time. He also felt that watching a movie could not express his gratitude. She thought Liu Hongmin was not willing to watch a movie with her.
"Let me say it right?"
"What are you talking about!"
Zha Jianying quickly pushed her away and sat at his study table , took out a pen and paper and started writing.
Wang Xiaoping was stunned for a moment, "Jianying, what are you writing?"
"Liu Hongmin told me a story today, and I want to write this story into a novel. "
Zha Jianying said without looking back.
Wang Xiaoping's eyes lit up, there was indeed something fishy between these two people. However, seeing Zha Jianying writing straightly, Wang Xiaoping did not disturb her. For a writer, inspiration is the most important thing. Once the inspiration is broken, you may never catch it again in this life.
Zha Jianying quickly wrote down the life of Princess Pingyang, and then began to write an outline. She did not plan to write down the entire life of Princess Pingyang, but instead wrote the four stories Liu Hongmin told about gathering the rebel army, joining forces at the Weihe River, conquering Chang'an, and garrisoning Niangziguan into a short story of more than 10,000 words.
Her writing style has always been good, and she usually publishes some articles in "Weiming Lake". It’s just that this is my first time writing a novel, so I’m a bit unsure about how to start.
But when I think of Liu Hongmin’s theory, no matter how it is written, I must dare to write it.
So, she started writing, and wrote more than 3,000 words in one night, finishing the part about gathering the rebels.
Lying down on the bed, she felt inexplicably uneasy. She was going to show it to Liu Hongmin tomorrow, and she didn't know what kind of evaluation Liu Hongmin would give.
The next day, Liu Hongmin looked at the manuscript in his hand and was very surprised. Unexpectedly, he casually told a story to Zha Jianying, and Zha Jianying actually wrote it into a novel.
I have to say that Zha Jianying’s writing style is definitely good, and she is extremely outstanding in the Chinese department.
However, the storytelling skills need to be improved. She made the mistake of a newbie, cramming all the plots into the novel regardless of whether it was important or not, making the novel look like a running account.
"How is it?" Zha Jianying asked anxiously.
“There is nothing wrong with the writing, but you need to reduce the plot to less than 1,500 words.”
Zha Jianying immediately understood the problem, "Do you think my writing is too long-winded?"
Liu Hongmin nodded, "When writing a story, you need a theme, and then tell the story around this theme. Those who are not The important plot can be deleted completely."
As he said, he put the manuscript into Zha Jianying's hands, "Believe in yourself, you can handle it."
Zha Jian. Ying nodded vigorously and left in a hurry.
Obviously, she wanted to finish the novel as soon as possible. She now has a strong desire to talk and wants to tell everyone what she is thinking.
After returning, Cha Jianying immediately deleted the plot. Her knowledge of literature was solid, and she quickly found useless plot points and quickly deleted them all. Then she smoothed out the plot of the story again, added additions and subtractions, and copied it into her notebook again.
After finishing writing, she rubbed her wrist. Writing a novel is really a physical job. This is a novel of one or two thousand words, and it is so laborious to revise it. So, each of Liu Hongmin's books costs around RMB 100,000, and it is dozens or hundreds of times more difficult to modify than it is for her.
On the third day, Zha Jianying gave the novel to Liu Hongmin again. Liu Hongmin helped her find some omissions, and then said: "It should be almost done after one last revision. Have you decided which magazine you want to submit it to?"
Zha Jianying was a little surprised, " Hongmin, are you saying that "Li Niangzi" can be submitted to magazines outside the school? "
"Of course!" Liu Hongmin said with a smile: "Speaking of it, it is much better than Shaobao. If so, it might become a masterpiece for the liberation of women’s rights.”
Zha Jianying opened her mouth, "I just incorporated some of my own ideas into it, how can I represent the majority of female comrades?"
Liu Hongmin asked with a smile: "You are a woman yourself! Why? Can’t you represent the majority of female comrades?”
Zha Jianying thought about it, and it seemed like that!
It would be an honor if this work could increase women's rights.
(End of this chapter)