Chapter 343 A cool article?
The sun is not dry and the breeze is just right. The weather in October is always so comfortable.
Nonhyeon-dong, cafe.
Li Yang is wearing a white T-shirt and light blue jeans. He looks clean and tidy. The sunshine shines on his face, and his smile is kind and warm, giving him a boy-next-door temperament.
When he walked into the coffee shop, he had already spotted screenwriter Kim Tae-hee waiting at the window, and immediately walked over with a smile.
"Hello, screenwriter Kim Tae-hee, nice to meet you." Li Yang took the initiative to say hello.
“Being called a screenwriter seems a bit unreasonable. I have also watched the plot of "The Son-in-Law of a Chaebol". The plot is tight, the characters are full of characters, and the logic is very strong. I have officially entered the screenwriting industry."< br>
The two shook hands and sat down. Kim Tae-hee is a woman in her fifties. She looks a little skinny and dark, and she speaks very directly. She said: "So just call me senior. It sounds more cordial." "
"Then I will take the liberty of calling you senior."
Li Yang smiled modestly, but his eyes lit up instantly after hearing this.
The peninsula screenwriter industry is very orderly and can even be said to be rigid.
In addition to writing recognized works, every new screenwriter needs to be introduced by a formal member if he wants to join the Writers Association and become a formal member.
It’s just that most of these veteran members have eccentric personalities and extremely high vision.
Most people may not be recognized even if they give gifts.
But the advantage is that once recognized, you will receive the protection of the Writers Association.
Li Yang wanted to join the Writers Association before, but he had a headache for a long time because of the introduction of people.
Unexpectedly, things would turn around like this.
With Kim Tae-hee's tone of voice, Li Yang could easily hear the other person's words.
This is the thought of support.
“Don’t think about it, my inspiration actually comes from your "Plutocratic Son-in-law". I have taken advantage of you, and I should compensate you."
Kim Tae-hee said calmly: "However, although the plot of "The Chaebol Son-in-law" is very suitable to my taste, there are only so many ways I can help for the time being. To become a formal member of the Writers Association, you need not only an inviter, but also at least It only requires the approval of seven official members, so if you want to join, you still need a phenomenal film and television drama."
As he said that, he seemed to be looking at Li Yang to explain, and waved his hand, somewhat. He interrupted impatiently: "At my age, there are actually a lot of things that I have to look away from. There is no shame in needing it, and there is no need to hide it."
"I"
Li Yang wanted to be polite, but when he raised his head, he found a pair of slightly cloudy eyes on Kim Tae-hee's old cheeks, but they were unusually deep, like wisdom accumulated after experiencing too many things, clear and firm. , a kind of returning to nature.
He knew very well that for such old people, politeness and tact would make them disgusted, so it was better to be sincere.
So the moment he opened his mouth, he suddenly felt a little embarrassed and said: "Is it so obvious?"
"You can tell the whole leopard at the first glance!"
Kim Tae-hee said calmly: " After I watched "Plutocratic Son-in-Law", I looked up your information and learned some news. I know that your current situation is very embarrassing. Only joining the Writers' Association may give you a way out. It's easy to guess. The person who just spoke At that time, I saw your eyes moving around, and you probably hesitated to speak, so I will just say it for you."
He said, "But I still suggest that you don't have to think too much about it. It’s best to put it in the next new book.”
Talk about the new book, Kim Tae-hee’s eyes were a little fiery and a little fanatical, and said: “As long as the plot of the new book satisfies me, I guarantee you a big copy. Gift.”
"Ah, this."
Li Yang is a little messy. He can put any gifts or the like aside. After he received the money from Cube, he is no longer short of money. The purpose of this trip is actually I have achieved it, but I feel a little guilty at the moment.
“You should know what kind of scripts I write.”
Li Yang couldn’t help but explain and said: “For books like “Sungkyunkwan Scandal”, I I’m worried that I can’t do much to help.”
No way.
It is better to make things clear in advance than to offend people later.
"If it were a drama like "Sungkyunkwan Scandal", I wouldn't come to you, but this time it's different."
Kim Tae-hee smiled mysteriously. The woman's words were a bit straightforward, but not embarrassing. She quickly said: "This time it's a cool article!"
"Shuangwen?" Li Yang couldn't help showing a surprised look, his eyes subconsciously After scanning Jin Taiji's clothes, I found that the old lady's clothes were very simple and plain. She didn't even have any big brand clothes on her. The only thing that might be more expensive was the simple and rough-looking thick gold bracelet on her wrist.
No matter how you look at it, it cannot be connected with the two words Shuangwen.
"What, you don't believe it?"
Kim Taiji frowned, as if she could see Li Yang's thoughts, and said slightly dissatisfied: "Young people should not be too limited in their thinking. What age is it? Old ladies don't If you know how to surf the Internet, you must read Hegel and Leo Tolstoy, so you can’t be interested in reading novels?”
“I didn’t say that.”
Li Yang smiled and quickly denied it.
He finally figured it out. This old lady looked ordinary, but when we talked about the script, her temper became very hot. Her personality seemed stubborn, but she was normal.
After all, the more you pay attention to it, the more you will cherish it.
For her, the script may be something she has pursued for a lifetime.
"Shall I read the script first?" Li Yang asked tentatively.
"That's right."
Kim Taiji finally showed a satisfied look, pushed a stack of thumb-thick notebooks on the table, and looked at Li Li, who had begun to read the plot seriously. Yang, while saying: "Working on scripts is not a business. You have to pursue the plot, don't do those slick things. If you have any questions, just say it. My old lady doesn't cherish face as much as some people. To me, the more brilliant the script is. , the happier I am.”
As he spoke, Kim Taiji gradually stopped talking and did not interrupt when he noticed that Li Yang was reading the pages carefully.
For a while, the coffee shop was quiet, only the sound of Li Yang flipping through the pages of a book was rustling.
In a daze, after an unknown amount of time, Li Yang finally finished reading the last page and closed the entire book.
At the same time, a slightly expectant voice sounded in my ears.
“How does my book look like? Is the plot good enough for a good novel?”
“There is nothing wrong with the underlying logic and basic structure. As for a normal urban love plot, it is quite satisfactory. But Shuangwen’s words shouldn’t count.”
Li Yang replied subconsciously, but then he realized that he seemed to have said the wrong thing and said hurriedly: “But it can be seen that his literary skills are very strong. The dialogue is much better than my half-hearted one."
He was so immersed in reading the script just now that he answered without thinking.
React at this moment and try to remedy it.
“I understand, but the plot is rubbish.”
Kim Taiji nodded to herself, as if she had some understanding, and selectively ignored Li Yang's remedial words.
Soon, he said again: "Go on, give me your opinions, see what needs to be changed, and let me see what the differences are."
"How can I give my opinions?"
Li Yang was a little embarrassed, and soon, looking at the old lady with her eyes wide open, he even couldn't laugh or cry: "It's really difficult. Your old book is logically self-consistent, and it's a very comfortable line. After changing it, it will become nondescript. "
"What should we do?" Jin Taiji was stunned, obviously aware of the problem Li Yang said, and soon said with a slight frown: "Then let's do this for now. , tell me what a cool script is, and just make changes according to this script outline."
As he said, he reminded: "Don't worry, an unsatisfactory script is not a script. It’s useless paper at best. In fact, I’m not very satisfied with it.”
“Then let me give it a try?”
Li Yang said with some humility: “Anyway, you listen and absorb what’s right. "Wrong"
"Okay, I understand, let's not waste time on such boring things." Kim Taiji waved her hand, as if she was impatient.
Li Yang suddenly smiled and said nothing.
No way.
Kim Tae-hee may not care, but as a junior, he still needs to be polite.
After all, although the old lady's words may be a bit blunt and not pleasant to listen to, the benefits are actually in place.
Soon, Li Yang became serious, and also mentioned his status, and said seriously: "Shuangwen, what is Shuangwen? The plot is to mobilize or stimulate the emotions of the audience. The direct plot is to make the audience feel happy. The audience seems happy enough.”
“How can it be so cool?”
Li Yang said seriously: “To put it simply, it’s just being scolded and then slapped back without hesitation. , If it’s not enough, take a gun and kill his entire family, just take this useless manuscript of yours.”
Li Yang turned over the pages of the book and pointed: “For example, here, why do the concubines of the chaebol family have children?” Children must be afraid when being bullied by older children, instead of finding ways to fight back. "
"It is natural for older children to slander others, but it is also normal for younger children to play tricks, right? "
“And here, my sister-in-law uses resources to manipulate her into submission?
This will limit some of the enjoyment.
The male protagonist cannot be soft-hearted just because the other person is beautiful. His psychological activity should be to find a way to break this restriction and get rid of the self-righteous woman. "
"And here, the heroine Bai Yueguang loves the heroine again, and then arrests the hero for justice?
If this kind of drama were placed in traditional Korean dramas, I would not comment, but if it were based on Shuangwen, it would be too waterlogged.
My suggestion is that when the male protagonist finds out, he either plans to trick Bai Yueguang to death or at least get revenge, or he uses Bai Yueguang's incident to gain greater benefits for himself. interests, and then immediately get rid of this self-righteous woman. ”
This.
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“Finally, it’s a question of the overall structure. The male protagonist has been reborn through time. Why is the goal If you have to inherit the family property, not..."
Li Yang said, smiling confidently, and said: "Instead of starting another family, even more awesome and powerful than the original family, senior nim, you Do you think this makes sense? ”
"Yes!"
After Kim Tae-hee thought for a moment, he nodded and said, "It makes so much sense."
As he spoke, he smiled and said, "I seem to know how to write it."
Speaking of this, I simply packed away the scraps and prepared to get up and leave, muttering: "I have to go back quickly, I can't waste my inspiration."
But I didn't take even two steps. After a pause, he came back and said with a smile: "Li Yang, I have benefited a lot from this meeting."
As he said that, without waiting for Li Yang to be polite, he continued: "I Didn't you say before that as long as you satisfy me, I will give you a big gift?"
"I'm very happy to see you, senior. It's so polite to give you a gift or something." Yang smiled humbly.
“You really don’t need it?” Kim Tae-hee half-smiled.
“That.”
Li Yang hesitated and said, “How about you tell me first?”
"That's right, you don't need to be so philistine like me."
Kim Tae-hee was obviously in a good mood, she started joking, and then said: "Others have the script first, and then the investment. People, but this is different for me. When I went out to eat some time ago, someone happened to be optimistic about the fast-paced drama of the streaming media era, so when we talked about creativity, we first finalized the investment, and then..."
Jin Tai After Ji finished speaking, he left in a hurry.
Li Yang was left alone, his dark eyes becoming brighter and brighter.
"What is this?"
Li Yang left with a smile, asked himself, then smiled and murmured: "Has good luck finally begun to favor me?"
< br>When he left the coffee shop, it was getting late outside.
I simply went home to recuperate and prepare for the official live broadcast with Zhou Ziyu tomorrow.
On the way, I thought about it and dialed someone’s phone number.
The moment the connection was connected, a happy but resentful voice sounded from the subject, saying: "Boss, did you finally remember that you still have a secretary?"
As he spoke, he lowered his voice and said in a flirtatious way: "How about it? When are you going to come to Hidden Rules' house?"
"Stop making trouble, this time there is something serious."
Li Yang laughed and cursed.
"Isn't that what people said is business?"
"Do you want to be an actor?" Li Yang asked directly.
"You"
"There is a drama, a TV series on SBS."
"I"
"The script is written by Kim Tae-hee."
Li Yang said, listening to the rapid breathing coming from the other side of the phone, he couldn't help but hold back a smile and said: "I helped you get a role."
As he spoke, he joked: "Of course, if some people only think about business and just want to be a secretary, I can accept it." : "Secretary, even dogs don't do it!"
The next afternoon, Jeju Island.
Under the blue sky and white clouds, on the golden beach, Li Yang pushed up the sunglasses on his face and looked at the busy pedestrians passing by, feeling suddenly touched and a little sad.
In fact, he has always felt that traveling is the most wasteful thing in life.
Also a waste of money.
If you have that time, it’s better to sleep quietly and feel comfortable.
But at this moment, he changed his mind a little. He just sat quietly for a while, and then he felt a little relaxed and happy, as if he had thrown away all the complicated thoughts. The lazy sunshine was shining on his body, which felt inexplicable. Comfortable.
Just as I was thinking about it, I caught a glimpse of a bright silhouette coming not far away.
(End of this chapter)