Sorry, I jumped
I hesitated for several days, but I still made this decision, and I feel sorry for the dozens of brothers who are still pursuing my studies. However, the increasingly serious CAV and the increasingly urgent schedule made me finally make this decision.
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To summarize some of the problems with this book, (I hope it will be used in the next book)
This book... should be classified as having traffic or not. This is a good example of catching up. On the one hand, it comes from the fact that it was my first time to write a book. My grasp of the rhythm was really a bit shaky. The first 30 chapters were polished repeatedly before starting the book, so I could still keep it, but the rest of it was completely exhausted and saved. After that, coding every day gradually left me no time to polish.
Another issue is the outline. Before I started the book, I wrote an outline for myself. However, after I tore it down and rebuilt it several times during the process, the outline gradually became very fragmented and loose. By the time I wrote the dream mezzanine plot, the outline was completely useless. Dropped...it felt like the story was directly out of my control.
I feel that the outline may not be as simple as I imagined. Although the outline of the story line looks relatively clear, I can feel the paleness of the outline when using it. Some plots are very good in my mind. Or maybe it’s the climax, but it turns out to be very sparse when written...
In addition, this book also has some problems in terms of character description. When describing the characters, I didn't make any preparations, which resulted in the character template being relatively pale and not very likable. In the final analysis, I didn't make sufficient preparations.
Take your time... I still like to write something, but if I start a book next time, I will be more calm and at least sort out the outline and other things before starting the book. Then check the information and at least dig out the details of the world view and the outline.
When I was looking for information for this book, I read some social science books about wizards and occult books. Although I didn’t use them in this book, I feel that there are many things in them that are very interesting. interesting.
For example, the relationship between witches (witch sacrifices), horned gods and devils, as well as the religious invasion relationship between the witch-horned god system and Catholicism. The horned gods were stigmatized as devils, and the invading gods became orthodox; and The "potions" cooked by witches are actually dark dishes, as well as their elf companions and the sacredness of salt...
But I don't know much about these things now, and I am still taking time to read about the Middle Ages. History, let me study it further, maybe some of the ideas in this book can be reproduced in another form. (End of this chapter)