Chapter 23 High Scores in History
“A junior high school student... This student is not only good at Chinese, but also good at history.” President Jian said, the third paragraph of the article used many historical allusions .
[The long hair flying, the green ox treading again, the deep and profound, that is "Laozi";
The long fishing in Pushui, the misty and mighty, allegorical and allegorical, that is "Zhuangzi" 》;
Traveling around the world, tempering the people, broad and broad, that is Confucius;
It is "Mencius" that speaks eloquently throughout the world, inspires generations, is immortal and immortal...]
It is an allusion. When fishing in Pu River, Zhuangzi was talking to two officials of the King of Chu. The latter wanted to invite Zhuangzi Born.
“If it is a speech, this manuscript is too powerful.” President Jian himself does not give many speeches, but he also knows that adding parallel sentences in the speech script will increase the momentum.
"Sichuan-Chongqing Division? There are so many talents in Sichuan and Chongqing. No wonder there are five teachers: Ba Jin, Ai Wu, Sha Ting, Zhang Xiushu and Ma Shitu." President Jian sighed with emotion.
The Five Elders of Shuzhong are well-known in the literary world. In addition, because the number of people participating in the Ye Cup in the three southwest provinces and one city is small, they were divided into two competition areas during the preliminary awards, Sichuan, Chongqing and Yunnan-Guizhou.
"From Han Fu, from Tang poetry, from Song lyrics, from Yuan people's singing and crying, and touching dramas - I feel that this child's Chinese language scores must be very solid. Look at these knowledge points, Tang poetry, Song poetry and Yuan Quming Qing novels, yes, why did you change Ming and Qing novels to Han poetry?" President Jian was a little confused, and at the same time he told himself to stop boasting and get down to business as a judge.
In terms of rating, President Jian was silent for a long time.
Ye Cup scoring has two categories: basic items and bonus items. The basic items include the evaluation of content, structure and language, totaling 60 points, and the bonus items have seven categories, totaling 40 points.
"98 points, excluding the novel idea, the rest can get full marks..." This article has a typical speech script structure, it can even be said to be a model speech script, and it does not jump out of the original structure. Naturally, there will be no points for novel ideas.
When President Jian was about to add points, he realized that the Ye Cup had been held for nine years since it was held in 2003, and the highest score was 96 points.
"The highest score in history, isn't it too showy?" President Jian decided to give it a try and give it a score of 97.
Because the article is so good, President Jian is convinced that it is not a falsification caused by extensive revisions by the instructor. To put it bluntly, if a Chinese teacher has such writing skills, he can gain a foothold in the literary world no matter how hard he works. .
President Jian began to prepare to write a review, and waited to write the review...
"I think the name Gu Lu looks familiar. There seems to be a Gu Lu in "Youth Literature"." I checked my mailbox for a long time, and just the day before yesterday, an article "Smashing Piglets" was sent to me by its juvenile magazine, hoping that as the president of the magazine, he would write a preface.
Oh, in "Youth Literature and Art", the "Preface" is called "This Issue's Reading Map", and the most exciting manuscripts will be recommended in each issue.
"What does the name Gu Lu mean? Yu Wei Zhikun, a descendant of Gu Lu?" President Jian never thought of it as a person. It is still unknown whether Gu Lu, who first contributed to "Youth Literature", was a real name or a pen name.
Even though there are many submissions from middle and high school students in "Youth Literature", President Jian also read "Smashing Piggy". The writing style is mature and there is no showy description of scenery unique to middle and high school students. It is absolutely Not written by young people.
Throwing these things behind, President Jian carefully wrote his comments and scored the highest score in history. He must have needed cross-evaluation from other judges. He had to write down the reasons for his score.
[Ju Chang: I submitted a few more manuscripts. This time I tried to be story-oriented, so I changed the writing method, which should be more suitable for "Story Club".
Mu Ziyi: Just pay a little attention to it. There is no need to change the way you write it!
Ju Chang: It doesn't matter. I have watched "Flower Window and Strange Grass" these days and learned a bit about ghosts. I am brave enough to give it a try. I'll send them over after I've finished writing all the manuscripts. ]
Seeing this, Lao Li was sweating profusely. A person must have a "formula" that he is best at when writing. Changing it easily can lead to failure.
In other words, some writers with strong writing skills can change their writing style, but in this way it is difficult to accurately express what they want to express. Lao Li is worried about a rising genius writer because he The words were ruined.
"Yingchuang Yicao" may not be well-known, but as a publisher's editor, Lao Li knows that it is one of the four major ghost books alongside Liaozhai, Zibuyu, and Yuewei Caotang Notes. Before Lao Li was about to say anything, QQ over there was offline, and he reluctantly took his hands off the keyboard.
Monday is a day that many students dislike, not only because it is the first day after the weekend, but also because there is a flag-raising ceremony and the whole school has to go to the playground.
Class 5 lined up neatly, but the students talked in small words. As long as they didn't go too far, Teacher Li didn't stop them.
After the flag-raising ceremony, a student from Class 30 in junior high school came to the stage to receive the award. He won the third prize in the Wudu Division in the 2011-2012 National Junior High School Mathematics Competition and has been recommended to Bachuan Middle School in Wudu.
The Preliminary Mathematics Competition is a little lower than the Mathematical Olympiad Competition, but the results are also very gratifying. Bachuan Middle School is also a school that barely ranks among the top ten in Wudu.
Principal Chang also came on stage. The current principal gave a scholarship of 1,000 yuan in front of the whole school, and then the winning students gave speeches.
Those who are good at mathematics are all masters. Gu Lu himself thinks so. The world is full of PUAs, but mathematics is never the only one, because you just can’t do it.
The ranking is based on height. Most girls are taller than boys in the first grade of junior high school because they develop earlier. But in the third grade of junior high school, many boys are ahead. This does not include shortcomings. Gu Lu was well-nourished, so he stood in front.
"What are you muttering about?" Tang Jingjing asked in a low voice.
There is a fat man in every class, a person who likes to gossip. That is Tang Jingjing, nicknamed Donald Duck.
“I was thinking that if one day I could go on stage and give a speech, it would be quite popular.” The fork-loading gene in Gu Lu’s body was activated.
"It's simple. It can be solved with one dollar." Tang Jingjing whispered.
So the master is beside me? Gu Lu motioned to Tang Jingjing to continue.
“If you buy two cigarettes at the store at the door and then are caught smoking in the toilet, you can get a school-level warning in front of the whole school at the flag-raising ceremony on Monday.” Tang Jingjing said.
“Are you really a genius?” Gu Lu sighed.
Cigarettes are sold secretly at the school gate in order to earn money from students. Now Chaotianmen sells a pack for 5 yuan, and one dollar can buy three cigarettes (a pack of 20 cigarettes).
I don’t know if junior high school students smoke to resist authority or simply to look cool. Gu Lu knows from the memory of the original owner that Zhang Yudong, Wang Wenjun and others would buy them and smoke them secretly in school.
After the flag-raising ceremony, the students slowly returned to the teaching building, and Fan Xiaotian quickly followed.
He reminded, "Don't talk to Mrs. Duck (Tang Jingjing's rather malicious nickname), she can't hide anything in her mouth."
Fan Xiaotian has the right to be angry. During the battle, one time his crotch was torn, and Tang Jingjing saw it. In just one morning, everyone in Class Five knew about this embarrassing incident.
If the original person has few friends due to his personal personality, then Fan Xiaotian’s poor popularity plays a big factor.
Students are very direct. Unlike adults, they will maintain a fig leaf on the surface when they are unhappy, but if students don't like someone, they just ignore it.
(End of this chapter)