Chapter 95 Kobe is not as good as you [Additional update for the leader Tu Yusheng]
["Mr. Holmes", seeing that the author's name is written by a Chinese, the writing style and wording habits, it feels like a foreign translated work, this Is the author a Chinese living abroad? ]
[The reading of excellent works should not be included in works that are still serialized, but should be released at once according to the rules. Secondly, I like this story. Although it is just the beginning, the elderly Holmes is a real British person. The old Holmes is still sharp and his basic deduction method is still easy to use, but he is limited by his flesh and blood, his memory is declining, and his movements are slow. , I even have to use a notebook to know what I did every day. The author drags God down from the altar, but I feel more intimate. Finally, I would like to add that "Mr. Holmes" should not be read among the best works. ]
[Unlike a mystery novel, the wording and sentence construction are more like a literary novel, with a lot of inner description. If I hadn't seen it in "Mystery of the Years", I would have given it a high score. However, in mystery magazines, it is given a passing grade at most, and at best it can be regarded as a literary novel with a touch of Sherlock Holmes. ]
Using questionnaires to get feedback is much less timely than leaving comments on the Internet, but the content of each form is very serious. After all, mailing is quite troublesome.
One-third of the first batch of readers who gave feedback wrote evaluations for "Mr. Holmes". This is a very high proportion. There are more than 20 works in each issue. Readers evaluate the works based on their own interests.
In the reviews, the positive rate is about 60%.
Generally speaking, the praise rate cannot reach the publishing line, but this book is different.
"The writing is good, but not reasoning enough. The book is quite literary... Gu Lu is young, but it can be seen from the banquet that day that he must have frequent conversations with himself, so there is a lot of psychological description."
Editor Gao also noticed the question about Gu Lu's choice of words and sentences in the previous questionnaire, "It is not good to imitate if you are too good at it. If you imitate the writing style of "Sherlock Holmes", of course it will taste like translation."< br>
"Publish a single book!" Chief Editor Gao made the decision and called Han Zang into the office.
Double harvest, in the near future, Gu Lu can go to Director Hu to redeem more privileges!
Gu Lu, who did not carry a mobile phone, did not receive the news that he was responsible for editing Han Zang. Wan Bai and Wu Du came.
The three of them met in the cafeteria.
"This is Teacher Wu Duwu, the instructor of Shuren Literary Club, and a famous writer who has joined the Writers Association. He has many works." Wan Bai introduced, "This is Gu Lu."
"Hello, Teacher Wu. I would like to ask Teacher Wu for more advice on this morning's work." Gu Lu took the initiative to say hello.
"I can't afford to give you any advice. The story is very complete. The most I can do is adjust the story into a drama format." Wu Du responded.
The master is the teacher. Although there are some people who rely on their elders and betray them, Wu Du rarely relies on his elders and never betrays them. Moreover, he has just finished reading "Yesterday's Park", and the needle of feeling lost is still pierced in his heart.
“I have no experience writing dramas at all.” Gu Lu responded.
A very calm young man, Wu Du thought to himself, and asked the question he was curious about when he read the article, "Does classmate Gu Lu have a younger brother or younger sister?"
"I have a sister." Gu Lu responded.
No wonder, no matter what, I want my sister to survive. From the content of the article, we can trace clues to the author's life.
Actually, I still have a question, how is your relationship with your father? However, they had just met, so it was still not convenient to ask so in-depth questions, and the instructor Wu Du also held back.
In this meeting, Wan Bai and Wu Du mainly represented the association to submit a format modification plan to the author.
The basic content will not be changed, but the format will be changed. Gu Lu has no objection to this plan.
After the deal was settled, Wan Bai finally breathed a sigh of relief. After running up and down these days, he was finally able to show the manuscript to the vice president and all the members.
Zhang Liru has put a lot of pressure on him. In recent days...
I haven’t said where Gu Lu will go for his lunch break. If nothing unexpected happens, he will go to the black Internet cafe to write a manuscript during his lunch break. After all, "Years· The follow-up royalties for "Inference" have not yet come down.
In the afternoon, after two classes, the students were free to fly. The entire school will leave the classroom.
As mentioned before, the three and four classes every Wednesday afternoon are club activity time.
Some students who did not join the club were free to move around in the playground.
“The freshman meeting of our basketball club is also very simple. A total of 35 people join the club. We hold a free throw line shooting competition. There are twelve shooting opportunities. The first place will receive a reward of 20 yuan.” Sports-related club member , the freshman meeting was held in the playground. President Lu Shangtong had no unnecessary words and announced the event straightforwardly.
Rewards for club activities are all funded by the school, which will not cause any controversy; what is controversial is class rewards. Parallel classes and experimental classes will reward students with high scores in the exam, and the fees will be from the class If you pay for it, there will be a lot of contradictions.
At the free throw line, Gu Lumeng scored two goals and failed to touch them several times. As cannon fodder, he stood aside silently.
"When I was eighteen, I stood on the stage of my alma mater like a gangster..." Gu Lu looked at the other freshmen who had scored five or six goals.
Lu Ping, who has athletic talent, scored 9 out of 12 goals and directly took first place.
“Why aren’t you happy after getting first place?” Gu Lu asked.
Lu Ping said, "My idol, Kobe Bryant entered the NBA when he was seventeen years old, and I will be seventeen next year. The gap is too big."
"You can't say that, you are better than Kobe is young, this is one win. You win one, Kobe has zero wins, this is two wins. You win two, and Kobe still has zero wins, this is a big win." Gu Lu patted Lu Ping on the shoulder, "Your future. There’s a lot to be done.”
There seemed to be some truth in what he said. Lu Ping felt much better and thought to himself that it would be a good idea to help Gu Lu come in.
The freshman assemblies of other clubs are also interesting. We cannot talk about them all. Let’s pick the key points——
Shu Humanities Club held a freshman assembly in the classroom of Class 1, Grade 2, with old members and freshmen. , about forty people, it was also a full classroom.
Wei Jiao, Qi Caiwei, Li Guyuan and other freshmen sit on the left.
Wan Bai, Zhang Liru and other senior students were sitting on the right side. I didn’t know whether to say something or not. Zhang Liru straightened her back and was taller than the people next to her.
The instructor Wu Du is sitting above.
It started with the freshmen sharing their own works one by one.
Among them, Qi Caiwei and Li Guyuan won a lot of praise. The former was mainly because of her appearance. The poems and emotions she shared were still relatively abstract.
Li Guyuan simply told a good story. When he returned to his seat, he heard what he wanted to hear most.
“The writing is really good, and the story feels very innovative.” Qi Caiwei said.
"No wonder you wear glasses." Wei Jiao said.
Although Wei Jiao's compliment was strange, Li Guyuan could barely accept it.
“The content shared by the new club members is of good quality, especially Li Guyuan, whose stories are well written.” The instructor Wu Du first encouraged and then gave Wan Bai a look.
The latter sent the printed copy of "Yesterday's Park", and every member had a copy.
“Everyone knows that this year’s school anniversary, our club will produce an original stage play, and this is the work we will rehearse.” Wu Du said.
The students lowered their heads and looked at the documents in their hands, especially the vice president Zhang Liru. They couldn't wait to see the manuscripts submitted by Rourou and Pinball before.
She wants to see how exciting the mysterious foreign aid is.
(End of this chapter)