End-of-paper summary
A familiar end-of-paper summary.
This volume was well written, not too difficult, and received mostly positive reviews. However, because the style is different from the previous one, some readers thought it was written by someone else.
emmmmmmm, if I can’t change it for a little bit, how can I afford to find someone to write it for me?
First of all, I would like to apologize to the original author, Amway.
"The Burial of Florian" is a very, very excellent masterpiece, a slow-paced road movie released in October 2023.
But unlike some road movies, it is not interesting until the climax. People who are suitable for it will like it after watching one episode.
Then there is an apology. The setting in the original work is very simple, and there will be no messy conspiracy theories like mine. The goddess has never appeared in the background.
The original work is really good. If some readers think that my writing is good, it means that the style of the original work is indeed good. If some readers think that my writing is bad, that is my problem and has nothing to do with the original work.
Okay, here are my personal thoughts.
At the beginning, because the subject matter in the weird world was blocked, the outline I wrote was useless, so my mentality was a bit broken. Writing Fulian felt a bit like giving up on myself.
Not many people have watched Fulilian, and even fewer people have watched it at the starting point, and the original work is quite complete. The characters of Fulilian and Elf Luke are a bit repetitive, so they joined the protagonist team. It's not particularly suitable.
Although it is excellent, Fulian's series is really not suitable for Qidian's style, so many readers will feel that the style of this series is very different from the previous series.
There are two main reasons. One is that the original work itself is different from other worlds, and the other is that the content I wrote is not particularly related to the original work.
Flylian's world view is set in more detail in places that need attention, but the places that are not needed are very brief or even not mentioned directly. In addition, the original work is not finished, so there are large tracts of blank space. Although it doesn’t suit Qidian’s writing style, it’s not impossible to write if you want to.
Of course, the goddess is actually a rather far-fetched boss, because when I first wrote it, I only planned to write it in a relatively fresh style, and still follow the traditional monster-fighting style. Upgrade step by step, fight the big demons, and then the golden finger awakens and solves the problem. Demon King.
But after Goldfinger awakened, the Demon King was not particularly attractive, so he brought in the Goddess to play. After writing a few chapters, many readers said that the style of the original work was better, so they continued to write in a style close to the original work.
But in this way, there will be no opportunity for the golden finger to appear. Secondly, there will be no main line and it will be very scattered... Although it is still a little scattered later, and a lot of foreshadowing has been buried before, so It was in the chapter "Meeting Gears" that most of the foreshadowing was revealed.
Although I haven’t read much of this chapter, the completion rate and follow-up rate are actually very good. In the early and middle stages until Lu Ke’s awakening, most of the reviews I received were positive reviews, and naturally there were a few negative reviews. , basically not adaptable to the writing style.
In general, as a reader who likes to wear the same clothes, I am very grateful that quite a few of them read this.
The ending is not well written. The best ending is to follow the style of the original work, in which the elf Luke realizes something after experiencing everything, and then awakens to the space.
But it is impossible to leave the foreshadowing until it is revealed, and when I think about it, apart from knowledge and space, those idiots have no such thing as friends, and I am a bit unable to do it to my biological son.
Especially the elf Luke, he will probably be the only serious Luke I wrote, so although the ending will be a bit bad if written this way, it still gives a relatively satisfactory ending.
Take a day off to write the outline.
The next world is tentatively scheduled to be Elden's Circle, which should not take long to write.
On National Day, in addition to writing articles, I also read animations, because I am used to reviewing the plot several times before writing articles to avoid making mistakes, but as I watched, I found that they were all reviewing classics.
Chinese Boy, The Adventures of Jackie Chan, The Adventures of Lolo, Inuyasha...
There are really few good animations in these years. If you think you like them, you can leave a message, but please don't say it. Some of them are so long that I can’t even see them.
(End of this chapter)