Talk about your thoughts!
In the blink of an eye, this book has been officially on the shelves for two months. Tingyu has gained a lot in these two months, but there are also many shortcomings. I want to chat with you.
First of all, let me report the results. The first order for Arcane is 1,600, the current high order is 9,300, the average order is 4,200, and the follow-up order is 900.
No matter how you say it, as Tingyu’s first novel to be published, this achievement is indeed very good. It has reached the level of quality, which is an achievement that I never dared to think of before.
Thank you all readers for reading this book!
After talking about the achievements, the next step is the shortcomings.
First of all, since the recommendation, due to various reasons of Tingyu himself, the performance has been declining. The 900 additional subscriptions can be considered a collapse, and the average subscription has also dropped from the highest 4700 to 4200.
Because of the flu and fever some time ago, Tingyu’s condition is not very good, and the update time is unstable. As a novice, maintaining stable updates for a long time is also a challenge for myself. After all, Tingyu is not very diligent. people.
After talking about other situations, let’s return to this book. The book Arcana has condensed Tingyu’s hard work over the past few months. Tingyu is working hard to write this book.
The plot before it was put on the shelves had many shortcomings. Everyone also gave Tingyu a lot of suggestions, which Tingyu accepted humbly. For example, the character description was monotonous and not rich enough, the plot settings were old-fashioned, and there were too many coincidences and not enough. Reasonable circumstances.
Tingyu also paid attention to the subsequent plot settings. At the same time, he was also reading books by other big writers, especially "The Lord of Mysteries". Recently, he was studying the emphasis on environmental description, character psychological description and profile description. Of course, I was just studying. If I could have as much writing power as a squid, I think it would be enough.
After the update yesterday, because I was on duty at work and took the time to finish coding, I sent a message to the writer asking for monthly passes or something. Unexpectedly, everyone reacted very strongly and gave Tingyu a lot of suggestions.
Hmm. To be honest, when the author saw a page of criticism in the background, Ting Yu’s mentality was a little broken. He even wrote some rubbish himself. Is he worthy of writing a book? A kind of thought (laughing~)
Here I would like to thank the boss from Legend of the Beginning. I couldn’t hold it in any longer and reflected on it in the Q group this morning. The boss comforted me and encouraged me, as well as the little red bag, love. Got it!
After thinking about it for a while, I suddenly felt
I am so hypocritical!
Readers are willing to spend real money to read their own books instead of pirated copies. Isn’t it hypocritical to still blame and worry about myself here?
If you have this time, you might as well write more words!
I'm sorry to all readers, I will humbly accept your criticisms and work hard to correct them!
Then back to the book, I briefly summarized it. First, the recent slow progress and water problems of the main line do exist in this regard.
This is a matter of plot control in Ting Yu. I always feel that entering the ruins directly would be too sudden and unreasonable. I always want to insert new storylines and rhythm. Wait a minute, this is my problem. I will pay attention to it later and ensure that the advancement of the main plot and the foreshadowing of the worldview are combined with each other, and I will control myself.
Big guys, please believe me, I really don’t do water just for water’s sake!
In terms of supplementing and describing the background of the novel, I think ArEmper is right in what he said in Chapter 197. The previous description of the world of Gaia was too thin and lacked depth. More words should be written in this aspect. I I deeply agree.
Especially in Lord of Mysteries, a deep and real world can be built through various simple environmental descriptions between the lines, which is amazing.
I will work hard in this area in the future, such as the fullness of the protagonist's character and the description of the supporting characters.
Second, insufficient updates.
This problem is very serious. Because Tingyu works part-time, he can only code in his free time. Tingyu has no plans to code full-time in the future.
In the past two days, I have gone back and reviewed the previous plot. To be honest, I personally feel that Arcane is still a readable novel that I can barely read. The most important thing is that I have not updated it enough. .
Using my reflection in Q group,
The biggest problem is that I update too little.
I also want to add to the world view,
I also want to promote the plot reasonably,
I also want to enrich the image of the supporting characters,< br>
You really want to set up a foreshadowing,
Two chapters and 4,000 words of updates a day,
I’m thinking shit!
I will work hard. Starting from today, I will save my manuscript and focus on coding!
Don’t dare to brag, I guarantee it will be updated more than before!
I strive to show you a story about Li Si, a novel from the past that everyone can read after dinner!
Listening to the Rain
Written late at night on Christmas Day 2023!
(End of this chapter)