Reflection, explanation
A reader reminded me that I should not explain many things so clearly, otherwise I would lose the pleasure of reading.
But writing a book is like cooking. The heat and seasoning are like the rhythm and climax, and I am responsible for the cooking.
Looking back at the last two chapters, I prepared a great ingredient, but it was not well seasoned and the heat was not that good.
From the content point of view, all the details I expected were displayed - but the heat was not enough, and the combination of these details still tasted a little wrong.
Now, let me make the logic of the previous chapter clear.
(Not to show off my superiority, but I hope everyone can understand that I am creating seriously, but there are indeed shortcomings, and I will work hard to move forward)
[Background of major events: Meet the protagonist Duo Mo, by the way, took Xiao Zhao to shoot the material.
Nested mini-events: A nosy guy appears to stir up trouble and catches the protagonist’s sore leg.
Implicit logic: the difference between the protagonist’s action expectations and realistic feedback.
Jealousy that she really wanted to express: From the sudden conflict, Zhao Hongjin once again saw the protagonist's problem. She chose to directly point out Mr. Cheng's "little cleverness" and expressed her views on it. After a series of foreshadowing, the two began to collide. 】
The beginning of the previous chapter sets the tone:
[The party Thomas held today was unusual. He only invited friends from his circle.
On the other hand, Thomas's house was big enough, so he called all his friends to his house.
The atmosphere of this kind of party will not be so serious. Everyone is friends, the level of the circle is not much different, and the fun is more decent.
Of course, there will be conflicts and disagreements in any circle, but situations like this are in the minority after all. 】
The tone is set at the beginning, this matter is not a big deal.
Three dimensions of explanation: one: they are all friends; two, they play decently; three, there are only a few cases.
The first foreshadowing, showing President Cheng’s perspective on things:
[The self-righteous output of this stick also fully reflects the arrogant yet inferior character of Koreans. .
He was arrogant, so arrogant that he accused an unknown stranger.
He has low self-esteem, so low that he needs to do inexplicable and inappropriate things to prove his 'difference'. 】
Here is the standard total score structure, which should be reviewed first and then dismantled.
Through this clear insight, it expresses Mr. Cheng’s objective judgment on this matter—it’s a big deal when things get tough.
But here I did not directly write down what President Cheng’s harsh comments reflected in his ‘seeking trouble when things get tough, it’s a big deal. 'view.
Why not write?
Because the construction of contradictory logic is not enough, as a writer of Bianshao, I need to control the rhythm of contradictions, so that everyone will feel more comfortable when they see Mr. Cheng take action later.
The second foreshadowing shows the onlookers’ views.
[Just when all the guests were confused by the inexplicable output of this stick, the organizer of the party, Domo, arrived at the battlefield first. 】
The opinions of bystanders here are feedback on the actual impact of this matter - do you see it? I only wrote one sentence for the first time and did not dare to write more.
Even only half of this sentence is written to show the perspective of the spectator, and the second half leads to the arrival of Thomas.
Why?
For the same reason, the logical construction of contradictions is not sufficient. Now clarifying the matter is just a small thing, which will make the dish taste wrong.
The third foreshadowing directly shows the views and attitude of Thomas, the master.
【Domo actually knew that Mr. Cheng was bragging, but he thought Mr. Cheng's bragging was very interesting, and Mr. Cheng was a friend he admired very much, so he didn't expose it, but cooperated very well.
And now, an arrogant Korean stickman is meddling in his own business and making things a bit complicated.
“Hello, I don’t know you, who brought you here?” Thomas silenced Brother Bangzi with just one sentence.
"That's it, Hi, I noticed that this woman seemed to have cheated on her boyfriend, so I wanted to stand up and expose her."
I realized that I seemed to have made a mistake. Brother Bangzi struggled to explain something, and he added.
“I heard about such a party from a friend and came here myself.”
After Duo Mo listened to Brother Bangzi's explanation, he thought for a while and asked with a smile.
"Hahaha, where are you from?"
The fat cook has already thought about how to deal with this matter.
"Cosmic Kingdom, what's wrong?" Brother Bangzi didn't understand the meaning of Domo's question.
“You also said that you are not Chinese, how do you know whether this wine is the real King Maozi?”
"Can you speak English? Hahahaha!"
Domo was amused by Brother Nosy Bangzi's words. The English in Bangzi country is really magical.
The Fat Chef’s friends laughed unkindly, and for a moment, the room was filled with a happy atmosphere. 】
This section is very long, and the overall theme is that Domo is on the side of the boss, suppressing the nosy brother.
In fact, it is also a more refreshing construction. As the host of the party, when Mr. Cheng did not say anything, he chose to help Zhao Hongjin get out of trouble and suppress the people who were looking for trouble.
Note that Domo knew that Mr. Cheng’s girlfriend was Temir, but he didn’t say anything about Xiao Zhao—this was to protect Xiao Zhao and Mr. Cheng.
He helped Mr. Cheng’s female companion out of the crisis, but did not mention the relationship between Mr. Cheng and Zhao Hongjin.
He asked Nosy Bangzi Brother who introduced him, but did not mention Zhao Hongjin. This was a clear bias.
There is also a foreshadowing detail, that is, Domo laughed at Brother Bangzi’s accent, and others laughed too - this is a reflection of everyone’s attitude towards this matter.
Please note that the plot of Domo’s Laughter here is not a sudden thought.
In the previous chapter, Dormer and Mr. Cheng’s flowerpot chat had already brought out something.
Thomas has always been a smart man, and these two chapters profile his intelligence.
There is no love without reason in the world, and Domo’s choice of side reflects his respect for Cheng Daqi.
He respected Cheng Daqi, so he cooperated with Cheng Daqi’s ‘lies’ and even helped Cheng Daqi’s female companion get out of trouble. Therefore, I think the foreshadowing part of the plot I wrote should be fine - except that it is a bit obscure.
The fourth foreshadowing is to break down these things from the perspective of Brother Bangzi.
[Nosy Bangzi Brother lives in Bengbu. He wants to integrate into the group, but now it seems to have become a joke, so he can only drive wildly on the wrong road.
"Tonight is a wine tasting party, and this wine is just ordinary Maozi wine. It is really not a king Maozi. This Chinese woman cheated on her boyfriend!"
Chicken thief Brother Bangzi chose to fight only one. He thought very clearly that it was impossible for a white man to like a Chinese girl.
In his eyes, the Chinese girl Zhao Hongjin is a liar who deceived her white boyfriend.
Well, because the resources have been sucked away by the beautiful father, the consequences of the insufficient cerebellum capacity per capita in Bangzi Country are as follows. 】
The attitude of the crowd was somewhat beyond Brother Bangzi’s expectations, and he could not change his mind.
So, his only choice was to fight Zhao Hongjin.
And the statement here, "The consequences of insufficient per capita cerebellar capacity in Bangzi Country are this" also shows that he did a stupid thing.
The fifth foreshadowing, written from Zhao Hongjin’s perspective - due to writing problems, I couldn’t think of an excellent expression for a long time.
[Zhao Hongjin already wants to leave, she is very disappointed with Cheng Daqi!
Being slandered makes me feel a little unhappy, but having Cheng Daqi take the blame makes me generally unhappy.
What she dislikes the most is Cheng Daqi’s irresponsible escape!
If you are wrong, you are wrong. If you are caught, just admit it.
What kind of man do you think you are if you dare to do something but not be honest? 】
Look carefully at this description, what is Zhao Hongjin dissatisfied with?
Are you being slandered?
Are you being blamed?
No! What she disliked was Cheng Daqi's "lack of responsibility"!
Why didn’t he take responsibility? She thought he was wrong and Cheng always didn’t show up after the incident.
For the sake of the subsequent climax, I couldn't directly write Zhao Hongjin's true psychology in too much detail, otherwise the emotions in the subsequent text would be insufficient - this would test Bian Shao's temperament.
In this way, there is an difficult balance between 'I can't write too detailed' and 'I must write Zhao's true psychology'.
(The author Jun murmured with tears in his eyes: I will write a mindless and refreshing article in the next book)
Okay, the background has been written and the tone has been explained.
The obvious five-dimensional foreshadowing has been dismantled.
Now, I pull out the parts that I really didn’t write well.
I made that mistake again - I couldn't write the climax well.
Due to writing problems, the climax couldn't be pushed forward. This was the case with the kidnapping case, and it is the same today.
【"Da Qi, I don't understand why you like to be clever so much."
Zhao Hongjin sighed with a complicated expression.
"The truth is, a little cleverness is effective most of the time. In the long run, mistakes are rare."
Mr. Cheng was very honest. He couldn't fool this smart girl, not to mention, he didn't want to.
"Oh, you are always good at talking. I can't talk to you." The peach-eyed girl pursed her lips and replied.
Mr. Cheng can indeed speak, or in other words, Mr. Cheng knows very well when to retreat and when not to retreat.
For example, now, he knows that what he did tonight is not perfect, but he can't retreat.
"In fact, we spurn a negative world full of lies, but no matter how hard we try, we inevitably and sadly become a part of this negative world.
A Zhao, I am of this world Part of it, you are too.”]
Note that in this conversation, Xiao Zhao did not say that he was wronged, did not say that he was slandered, and did not say that Daqi had done something wrong.
She doesn’t feel bad about being slandered, nor does she feel too sad about being pointed at the nose and scolded.
She didn't even want to say that Cheng was always wrong.
What the nineteen-year-old girl saw was that her friend was not doing things the right way.
She ignored herself after being scolded and slandered, but seriously talked to Mr. Cheng about the shortcomings of his methodology.
Summary: This is so romantic and so cool!
So, after seeing Zhao’s reaction, Mr. Cheng chose to be honest - ‘He is not willing to deceive Xiao Zhao’
And here, what did Mr. Cheng think of? What is Mr. Cheng thinking?
I didn't write it.
I think it would be too pretentious to write it, but Mr. Cheng must have thought of it a lot.
Because of the difference between the author's perspective and the reader's perspective, I am a bit stuck here.
The premise for Mr. Cheng to feel something is that Sister Zhao is romantic and cool enough.
As an author, I understand, so I write in general terms, but readers don’t understand.
This thing is stuck here.
I am a fool!
Now continue to dismantle.
【Mr. Cheng knows very well when to withdraw and when not to withdraw.
For example, now, he knows that what he did tonight is not perfect, but he can't retreat. 】
These two sentences are my hints to readers in this plot, but they are still too vague.
【“In fact, we spurn a negative world full of lies, but no matter how hard we try, we inevitably and sadly become a part of this negative world.
A Zhao, I am part of this world, and so are you.”]
Is this correct? Or is there something wrong?
At least Zhao Hongjin didn't see anything wrong - Mr. Cheng is indeed tall.
Therefore, the subsequent plot is drawn out like this.
That’s it, the preparation for the climax and the beginning of the climax have been dismantled.
I will now revise the original text and try to optimize the climax.
(End of this chapter)