Remarks on the first volume
The first volume is over. Overall, I am quite satisfied. The plot follows the outline. The current results are pretty good. It has been on the shelves for more than 20 days. From the first order of more than 1,500 points, it has now reached the high-quality line. However, the collection has not reached 30,000, so I can only wait for first-hand recommendations.
At present, the plot of the first volume has been changed. I originally planned to kill the princess Zhou Xiyue before starting the second volume, but after thinking about it, the plot of killing Zhou Xiyue has already left the capital. In Volume 2, too.
In addition, in the first volume, the biggest change is the four sisters of spring, summer, autumn and winter.
Because in the initial design outline, there were not many emotional scenes designed for these four sisters, and there was relatively little space for emotional interaction with the protagonist. They appeared as tool female supporting characters, used to promote the plot and help the protagonist to survive. The difficulty can be said to be Jiang Yi's dowry. It will definitely be closed, but the effect is functional and there is not so much emotional foreshadowing with the protagonist.
After all, there are actually quite a few female protagonists in this book, and adding them together is indeed a bit too tiring.
The reason why I changed my mind about adding scenes to them is because I was thinking that no matter whether I will write another harem novel in the next books, at least I will write this one as the last harem novel. of. In this case, it was a bit unfair to the four sisters, so I decided to pave the way for some emotional scenes for them and try to make them as perfect as possible.
But first of all, the integrity of the outline must be ensured. The main plot cannot be changed just to take care of them. Therefore, when adding scenes for them in the early stage, we can only choose a very clichéd plot and follow the plot. To be honest, I really regretted the two chapters that added scenes to Xia He. I almost ruined the character of the protagonist. Fortunately, I pulled it back in time and got on the right track, which is not bad.
At present, the basic characters of the four sisters have been written out. Xia He is cold-hearted and straightforward, Qiu Ye is sentimental, Dong Xue is lively and clever, and the eldest sister is rich in experience. It will be easy in the future.
As for the first volume, I said I would recommend a female protagonist, essentially Xia He. As for Queen and Meow Meow, they are welfare recommendations and will definitely be included in future volumes. Basically, my design idea is to officially recommend one volume for each volume, plus bonus promotions.
From the bottom of my heart, I wrote this book as the last harem novel, so I will definitely write more heroines and try not to leave any regrets. Or the aloof heavenly goddess who seeks Tao, or the charming underground queen, or the queen who is the mother of the world, or the queen mother of the lord of a country, or the future queen of Cao Mingzhu, or the future Qingchen daughter-in-law with unparalleled swordsmanship, or the future queen of the demon world His ex-wife, or the future sword fairy, or playing with snakes, foxes, phoenixes, etc.
There are young girls, mistresses, mature women, and even nurturing heroines... Except for a few genres that really cannot be written, I have written everything that can be written.
And in order to avoid confusion in writing, they are distinguished by type, and who and who should come out when writing which part of the plot are clearly divided. In addition, as I said at the beginning, I will give some of the heroines in this book independent thoughts and will not let them revolve around the protagonist and have their own pursuits. I will try my best to let readers have their own favorite heroines. The heroines all have their own characteristics, whether on or off the couch.
For example, Jiang Yi, this is written in the direction of beauties. She is charming and charming. The only heroine in the book can call the protagonist "Husband (ba) Jun (ba)" .
Of course, the heroine is one thing, but the most important thing is the plot development.
After all, not many people like to watch the heroine Seese.
I mentioned the plot development at the beginning of the book. After entering the Jianghu, the protagonist will follow the path of Lu Xiaofeng, Chu Liuxiang, etc. Of course, the style will definitely not be so casual and unrestrained, but the general writing method is like this. There may occasionally be some pretense and slap-in-the-face plots. There was nothing I could do, it was too oppressive in the capital, so naturally I had to show off my clan style when I got outside, and I never had to talk about things that could be solved with a slap.
The heroines who have the most scenes in the second volume are naturally Qu, Ran, and Li. They fight around each other. They appear less in the early stage. They will not enter the scene until the protagonist has finished delivering the express and enters Qingzhou. To the point.
In short, I am personally quite satisfied with the first volume. Looking back now, the plot before the release of the Riddler was indeed too scattered. No wonder the first order was so bad. The subsequent plots will not be so convoluted and should be killed. Kill, show it when you need to, show off when you need to show off, eat seafood when you need to eat seafood...
Well, that's it, the road is long and the beauty is like jade, let's set off.
In addition, brothers, please vote more and so on, thank you for your support, okay?
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