Chapter 170 Young Master with Kidney Deficiency
The time at home is more than a little freer than at school.
The main reason is that Li Yan's parents are not at home during the day, so they can direct... act out the drama of life.
As it approached twelve o'clock, Li Yan got up quietly and sent out the VIP chapters, so he didn't pay attention to the data.
The next day Chen Fengling came back at around seven o'clock to prepare breakfast for Li Chun. As soon as she entered the kitchen, she saw Li Yan sitting at the desk and typing on the computer keyboard. This was a big surprise.
"I will look at the sky and trees in the distance every once in a while to take care of my eyes."
Li Yan successfully predicted Chen Fengling's move.
“I also get up so early every day in school and I am full of energy.”
He predicted successfully again.
Chen Fengling has nothing to say. Since her son is working so hard, she can only cook more delicious food to replenish his body.
In the first semester of junior high school, I have already grown a few centimeters. Eat more and try to grow to 1.8 meters!
Nowadays, Chen Fengling would not find it too expensive even if she feeds her son lobster.
Kaiyuan was still sending messages to Li Yan at three o'clock in the morning last night. The first order increase was in line with expectations, which already kept him awake at night.
Quick updates.
You’ve read the 300,000-word manuscript and you’re urging me to update it?
As soon as Li Yan replied, Kaiyuan replied instantly:
Get excited, these are all income and achievements! If it were another author, you would be asking me "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" me every day. You are so cold and cold that you make me feel like a licking dog.
Li Yan: Only standing on the top of the mountain can make me feel excited.
Kaiyuan: Here are my recommendations for you!
Then he sent another document - "Kaiyuan Compiled Edition of Internet Writing Skills".
Li Yan clicked through and took a look. They all teach how to write strong emotional points, how to place hooks out of context, how to set up suspense, how to maintain the update rhythm, and how to attract readers to click in with a few free lines in the title and the beginning...
Kaiyuan didn't say anything, and Li Yan didn't answer anything. He just asked the editor:
Can I show it to the young master?
Kaiyuan thought about it for a long time and didn't know what it meant, but he was a noble person after all, so he left a message "Don't spread it outside" and went to work.
What do you think? Li Yan asked the young master with kidney deficiency.
The young master actually replied in seconds: "I have read it."
Are these two good guys not going to sleep in?
Even if you are not a student, today is the weekend!
Li Yan: Young Master, I’m just curious. If you want to watch a pretentious plot now, the title and the first few lines are going to slap you in the face. If you click on it, you will find that this chapter says In the end, he just raised his hand. Would you scold the author?
Master: Yes.
Li Yan: Then the title of the next chapter is "The raised hand will eventually fall", and the first few lines are almost like slaps. Will you read it?
Master: Yes.
Li Yan: In this chapter, the protagonist’s slap was about to be sent out, but someone stopped him. After writing for a long time, the protagonist raised his hand again. Would you scold the author?
Master: Greetings to his family.
Li Yan: So...
Before he finished typing, the young master had already sent the answer:
But I will continue to read until this slap comes.
Li Yan sighed: Just scold and scold and then look at it, the more you scold, the more you look at it?
Master Kidney Deficiency: If you see this a few times, you will get tired of it and just throw it away.
Li Yan: But there will always be people who continue to watch.
Mr. Kidney Deficiency: It’s up to you to choose.
Li Yan: Give me a chance.
The young man with kidney deficiency responded instantly: How can I give you a chance?
Li Yan: I didn’t have a choice before, but now I want to write a good story.
Master Shenxu: Okay, go tell the editor and see if he will let you write a good story.
Li Yan: He really gave it to me. He was very supportive. He sent me some tips this time, and he didn’t give me any requirements. Maybe he just did as he pleased. Afraid of affecting my rhythm.
Mr. Kidney Deficiency: Sorry, I am a reader.
Li Yan laughed: Okay, okay, it’s time to play.
Master Kidney Deficiency: Which drama is going on?
Li Yan was stunned. Could it be that you and I have been talking about each other for a long time without knowing that this is "Infernal Affairs"?
However, it happened to be a holiday and it was a Saturday. Li Yan took advantage of this topic to get into real life:
Speaking of Mr. Young Master, I am really grateful for your golden alliance. I hope I can invite you if I have the opportunity. You have a meal. Mr. Kidney Deficiency: Just don’t forget about me when you become a great writer.
Li Yan: It’s nothing. But let me tell you, I am actually just a junior high school student.
A man like Mr. Shenxu who spends hundreds of thousands of gold is probably a big boss. I wonder if the author of the book he is interested in is a little brat who may be one step or more younger than him. What an idea.
Mr. Kidney Deficiency: What a coincidence, I am also a student.
Okay, a rich second-generation college student took over several companies from his father and is also a student.
Li Yan: Why did the young master have such a name?
Master Kidney Deficiency: Because I am quite lustful, I occasionally feel like my body is being hollowed out.
My dear, I do have kidney deficiency!
Li Yan: Young Master usually...does a lot of activities?
Kidney Deficiency Master: Junior high school students should not care about these things and study hard.
Li Yan: Okay, may I ask where the young master usually spends his time?
The Young Master with Kidney Deficiency: At home, how else can we do it in public?
Li Yan's hands were shaking: Uh...that's not what I meant. I was asking you where you usually live and see if we have a chance to have a meal together.
Young Master with Kidney Deficiency: Linjiang Province.
What the hell? Li Yan was shocked: I am also in Linjiang! I am studying in New Taipei and my home is in Lincheng!
Master Kidney Deficiency: What a coincidence, I am also in New Taipei.
However, it seemed that he was not willing to reveal too much, and Li Yan did not ask any more questions, but instead started talking about the plot.
But Li Yan has basically drawn a portrait of the Kidney Deficiency Master in his mind, a rich second-generation college student with kidney deficiency with dark circles - he probably hangs out in Linjiang University Town.
After chatting about the plot for a long time, the young master said that he still had something to do and was about to log off.
But before he went offline, he suddenly asked Li Yan: You just want to write a good story, right?
Li Yan: Yes.
Master Shenxu: But the data will tell you that you were right to edit that document.
Li Yan: I am right.
Mr. Kidney Deficiency: Very good, stick to yourself. I admire you for this, because if your persistence leads to the data falling short of expectations, I will give you another golden alliance.
The boss is even more confused! Li Yancheng was terrified, fearing that this old man would really hit him again, and then he would really become a kept author.
How is this appropriate? !
I, Li Yan, a dignified writer and a strong-willed true man, how can I eat a second meal of the food I just brought in?
Wait until the data really fails to improve, then take care of it.
It was early in the morning to talk to myself to refresh myself. Seeing that the time was approaching 7:30, Li Yan opened the dialog box with Xiaopang:
Where is the winter vacation special training diary that was promised? Is your goal on the first day just to sleep in?
Lin Zhiyuan did not respond, but the dormitory group avatar jumped. It was a message from Liang Tiancheng: What are your plans for the winter vacation?
Li Yan looked at the only one whose profile picture was lit up in the group and replied:
They tell you with practical actions that you should sleep in on the first day.
Sky Word A: What about you, Li Yan?
Li Yan: It’s rare to see you surfing so early, Liang Ban.
Sky Language A: Fortunately, I don’t want to waste my winter vacation. I thought about the gap between me and you, and the gap between me and Chen Fan, and decided to learn more knowledge in advance, regardless of whether it is useful or not. Use it and expand it first.
Li Yan: Very good. As for me, whatever I’m doing in the dormitory, I’ll do whatever I’m doing here, writing, reading, and playing basketball.
Sky Language A: I made a diary to record what I did every day. I hope this diary will be fruitful when the winter vacation is over. Then I'm going to study, Li Yan886.
The avatar is dark.
Li Yan could imagine how other roommates Meimei would feel after seeing such a few words chatting while they were sleeping.
You really don’t blame me. Li Yan smiled and turned off the computer, walked to the window and stared at the sky in the distance.
The small window is blocked by the iron shed nearby and the community in the distance, and only a small piece of sky cut into a diamond shape can be seen.
Before his rebirth, he lamented, "How can I fly high in such a sky?" It was quite hypocritical.
Read a book, you don’t often have this kind of peaceful state of mind. Now you don’t expect any accumulation or improvement when reading a book, just enjoy it.
At night, Li Yan was complaining in the room that Xiaopang had started to mess up on the first day. At the same time, he was paying attention to the first booking results that were to be announced in four hours. Chen Fengling in the living room suddenly received a phone call.
Chen Wenjing, the class teacher from Li Yan’s primary school days.
(End of this chapter)