Chapter 156 The plot of the newcomer will collapse!
"If you have time, please come to the humble house more often. Oh, you are reckless, this house is very good, it cannot be regarded as a humble house." When Oda Shingo said goodbye to the landlady, he wanted to be polite, but found that it was not Belongs to the landlady.
"Oh? Do you want me to come more often?" Mrs. Yukino stood at the door of the bedroom, with a playful smile on her lips.
She deliberately glanced at Toudou Kojo and Namikaze Yukaku, who were almost escorting them to the left and right.
"Ahem, you two, don't be so rude. Or I should get up by myself." Oda Shingo was about to get out of bed.
"You're wearing flowery underwear and you want to give it away?" Todo Xiangcheng found an excuse and quickly stopped her.
Don't let Oda Shingo and the landlady be together, so that they don't have to look back and forth with eyebrows all over their faces.
"Oh? Even Oda-kun, you know what you are wearing. I'm afraid someone won't want to come if I come a few more times." Mrs. Yukino covered her lips and smiled softly.
Oda Shingo was angry: "Don't pay attention to these two children."
Before Toudou Kouchi could protest, Namikaze Yukaku said first: "She is not young."
Oda Shingo rolled his eyes, I knew this was the sentence.
The two women saw off Mrs. Yukino, and Oda Shingo confirmed that Halo 2 was indeed disabled.
Oda Shingo tried to ask the system what the specific reason was. I don’t know if it’s a system bug that counts the landlady as unmarried, or some other reason?
But the system remained silent and continued to pretend to be dead.
So when the two girls came back, Oda Shingo explained to them: "I asked Mrs. Yukino to come here for work."
"This excuse is really not serious. Can I give you another chance?" Todo Xiangcheng looked contemptuous. Namikaze Yukaku also looks similar.
"With her by my side, I feel that my work efficiency is much higher." Oda Shingo couldn't explain the existence of the system's halo.
Neither woman answered this time, but judging from the reaction that turned into narrowed eyes, they were even more contemptuous.
Forget it, as long as the halo effect exists. Oda Shingo once again warmly invited the landlady to come over on his mobile phone.
"If you have time." The landlady replied.
Oda Shingo is not sure what her attitude is, but it's good to have hope.
The next day, Mrs. Yukino really came.
After reading the original drawing, she sat there and started writing comments on the copy.
After Oda Shingo looked at it carefully, he was immediately shocked.
Many of the problems pointed out are very accurate, and some of them were even unknown to Oda Shingo himself.
And after communicating with her, I feel more and more that Mrs. Yukino is very capable. After correcting some of the dialogue according to her statement, the expression was indeed better.
"I just read comics since I was a kid and saw too many things." Mrs. Yukino smiled modestly.
But Oda Shingo could notice that her proud eyes glanced at the two women.
The two women captured this micro-expression very accurately, and immediately worked harder to win the praise of Oda Shingo.
I don’t know if it’s due to the increased efficiency of Halo 2, or because of protecting the nest, coughing, or a sense of competition, but the work efficiency of Oda Shingo’s studio has actually increased significantly.
The speed and quality of manuscripts are actually better than before Oda Shingo fell ill!
When Oda Shingo recovers from his severe cold a week later, the original manuscript of "Parasite Beast" has been compiled and has reached episode 13!
"Oda-kun, your plot of "Parasite" is really great." Mrs. Yukino praised sincerely.
She feels more engaging than "One Punch Man" because you don't know what the story will happen next.
It’s no exaggeration to use imagination and imagination, and the meaning contained in it becomes more apparent the more you think about it.
"It still needs to be significantly revised, and every climax node requires repeated consideration." Oda Shingo is very serious about constantly screening problems.
If you just copy the original work, you can already confirm success. But Oda Shingo is not satisfied with this, he wants to get the number one spot on the popularity list next month!
After "Parasite" appeared in the "Jump" issue, the popularity results for the second issue came out.
Online voting dropped a lot, to just over 3,000 votes.
Because physical voting increased, the number of votes increased from more than 2,000 to nearly 3,000. Ranked third in the popularity rankings. Although it has dropped one place, it is a small fluctuation and its position is still very stable.
Xinchang surrounded the online group and made an analysis immediately.
"No way, are the readers of this magazine starting to accept him?" Watsuki Kosuke was a little worried.
Takeda Takeda is very confident in controlling the setting of female characters: "Impossible, absolutely impossible! Just based on that Tamiya Ryoko, it is impossible for comic fans to support him!"
"Comic fans are indeed polarized towards Tamiya Ryoko's attitude. However, the controversy is too great, which is equivalent to advertising and gives him an advantage." Your point of view is too old-fashioned! Watsuki Kosuke cursed inwardly.
In what era are you still insisting on traditional female roles? Don't be ridiculous, comic fans are tired of it!
"This guy did it on purpose! He deliberately made the readers quarrel!" Minister Hyakki Hayato felt very uncomfortable.
Takeda Takeda made an angry expression: "Damn it, how come this guy always takes advantage!"
He has made countless villains in his studio. Not to mention common things like stabbing with needles and chopping with knives, hanging and beheadings caused by wind and rain, and some of the little ones were even put in the refrigerator.
Maybe Takeda Takeda's expertise in curses is even better than in comics...
Vice President Koyama, who had not spoken for a long time, finally said something decisive: "As long as his next plot collapses, nothing will matter! As a newcomer, he is serializing two comics at the same time. The most likely problem is that the plot collapses!"
"Congratulations, President Xiaoshan!"
"President Xiaoshan hit the nail on the head!"
"As President Koyama sees it!"
The three subordinates flattered him one after another.
They are eagerly looking forward to the next episode, and the plot collapses!
The new issue of "Jump" will be on sale soon.
In order to ensure the interests of this magazine, the online serialization of "Parasite Beast" is half a beat slower than the physical version of this magazine.
As a result, another comic fan stood guard at the door of the bookstore.
"Is "Jump" coming?"
"It's here!"
This time, there were not just four comic fans, but six sitting in front of the bookstore.
The bookstore owner did not drive them away.
This kind of sign is a living sign. As long as the entrance of the bookstore is not blocked, it is a good thing if someone can leave.
"Why are you in such a hurry this time?" the shopkeeper asked curiously.
"The parasitic beast has entered the school! It's going to kill Shinichi in front of ordinary people!"
"Oh? Yes, that Mr. A wants to kill Xiaoyou." The shop owner was also looking forward to it, but he was too busy taking care of the bookstore every day and forgot about it.
Now that I think about the plot again, I want to watch it even more.
He opened "Jump", thinking that if he was busy taking care of the store, he would just take a few glances and know the result.
But once he opened it, he couldn't decide how long to look at it.
The plot of the manga begins with Tamiya Ryoko.
"Stupid thing!" Tamiya Ryoko felt Mr. A's murderous intention to come to campus and suddenly said this in class.
She directly left the students studying and left the classroom.
On the other side, Mr. A was stopped by a male teacher on campus.
Unlucky male teacher.
(End of chapter)