Chapter 168: Questions that smart people can’t understand, fools have answers
Whoosh, whoosh, whoosh —
Oda Shingo kept turning the pages of the drawings, his eyes scanning rapidly like a scanner.
From the moment Izumi Shinichi rushes to the beach to the end when he looks at the decay of the parasitic beast and the remains of his mother, there must be something wrong with this part!
This is an intuition, but I just can’t see where the problem is!
It's just a weird feeling. Although the plot is exciting, something is not right.
Oda Shingo sent the new manuscript to Saburo Mikami and Assistant Okita.
Feedback came back quickly.
[Oda-sensei’s works are always of high quality! ] Assistant Okita is already a little fan.
Saburo Mikami also made it clear: [Xingo, you may surpass the first place "notouch" in the last issue this time! ]
Even though Oda Shingo said there seemed to be problems, the two still felt that the storyline was smooth and satisfying, and there were no problems.
Even though he heard what experienced people said, Oda Shingo still felt that there was something wrong in his heart.
From afternoon to around eight o'clock, he was trapped in the part where the protagonist, Izumi Shinichi, killed the parasitic beast murderer.
But the more impatient Oda Shingo is, the less he can find a problem!
Namikaze Yukaku and Todo Kouchi each looked at him quietly.
Oda Shingo scratched his hair in frustration.
I clearly see that there are problems with the original work, but after the adaptation, why do I still vaguely feel that there are problems?
Oda Shingo trusted his instincts.
This is based on years of work experience. If you intuitively feel that there is a problem somewhere, there must be a problem, but it is just that it is temporarily hidden by something.
It was getting late, and after Mrs. Yukino left, he gradually became impatient.
clatter.
The soft sound of a tea cup was from Namikaze Yukaku.
"Have a drink of watermelon juice." Yukaku Namikaze took advantage of the short time when Todo Koucho went to the bathroom to open a fruit drink for Oda Shingo, "I heard my father say that watermelons in China are called cold melons. , you can calm down and concentrate.”
"Ah, thank you." Oda Shingo felt much better after hearing the respect the Japanese had for China.
This is a sense of pride that comes from the glory of the motherland.
"I've finished today's detailed drawing work. I'll take a look at it too." Namikaze Yukaku sat next to Oda Shingo, "I've been reading this part of the plot. Do you really have a problem?"
"I feel like there's something wrong, but I don't know where it is." Oda Shingo sighed.
Namikaze Youkaku said nothing and read the manuscript again.
Oda Shingo drank watermelon juice quietly, closed his eyes and calmed down.
Combined with the feeling of reading comics for many years, after Namikaze Yukaku reviewed the manuscript, he still didn't feel there was any problem.
The protagonist is decisive in killing. After making a mistake and almost losing his life, he can always protect his father with determination and revenge for his mother cleanly. He is a very typical perfect protagonist.
After Yukaku Namikaze thought for a while, he said seriously: "I can't see the problem. I think both the pictures and the characters' personalities are well portrayed. Moreover, after his new friend was hurt, he became angry about it. He looks quite handsome.”
At this time, the faint sound of the faucet in the bathroom was heard, and Namikaze Yukaku stood up and returned to his seat.
When it was approaching nine o'clock, Oda Shingo announced that this was the end of today's work.
He got up and went back to his room.
At nine o'clock, he took out his mobile phone and started calling Mrs. Yukino.
This was what Mrs. Yukino hinted to him before leaving.
"Oda-kun is really on time. Are you counting the clocks and waiting to call me?" Mrs. Yukino's gentle voice came from the phone.
Oda Shingo didn't answer, but just said: "Madam, you answer the phone very quickly."
Mrs. Yukino smiled, and also did not explain, but asked Oda Shingo: "First, please pull open the curtains suddenly, open the window and see if there is anyone on the wall outside the window?" Oda Shingo: "?"
He quickly understood what Mrs. Yukino meant.
"Namikaze Yukuru is not here." Oda Shingo said to the phone, and then took the initiative to go to the door, gently pushed the door open, and looked at no one outside, "Todo Kouchi is not at the door either."
The possible situations of female ninjas peeling open windows or female men sticking cups against doors to eavesdrop were not there.
"Haha, Oda-kun's mind is moving very fast." Mrs. Yukino spoke briskly, "What is Oda-kun wearing now? His pajamas are still the same as during the day and have not been changed."
Oda Shingo said anxiously: "Hey, Mrs. Yukino, please don't beat around the bush. You have an idea of what I was worried about during the day, right?"
Mrs. Yukino said slowly and leisurely: "Your deadline is the day after tomorrow, why are you in a hurry?"
Her voice was already beautiful, and speaking slowly and softly like this had an inexplicable coquettish flavor that made people's bones tingle.
"Please, tell me quickly, I have a quick temper."
"But I'm not in a hurry, forget it, I won't tease you anymore, but I'm actually not completely sure, so I can only give you a hint." Mrs. Yukino knew how to judge the scale very well, and she began to speak seriously: "As someone who has read a lot of comics As a long-time comic fan of the work, the problems I can’t see are probably related to my lack of expertise.”
"Huh? What is Mrs. Yukino not good at?"
"There are many things I'm not good at, but what's relevant to this matter is probably... human emotions."
"Ah?" Oda Shingo was stunned.
This part of my plot doesn't involve love, right?
"This is a reminder, Oda-kun, just think about it yourself, I'm ready to hang up." Mrs. Yukino's words became brisk again.
"Hey, this is not a reminder." Oda Shingo quickly rubbed him hard.
Mrs. Yukino was silent for a few seconds, then suddenly said: "Oda-kun, have you ever heard of a Kansai proverb? [Questions that smart people can't figure out, fools usually have answers.]"
"Why?"
"I'm going to take a shower."
"Drink more hot water... No, good night, Mrs. Yukino." Oda Shingo habitually replied to the conversation between the licking dog and the goddess.
After hanging up the phone, Oda Shingo was stunned for a long time.
[Questions that smart people can’t figure out, fools usually have answers to. ]
Mrs. Yukino means that she is a smart person, and I am also a smart person, Oda Shingo thought about it.
Then a fool is...
Thinking of this, Oda Shingo touched his chin and opened the door, looking at the door of Toudo Xiangcheng's room.
No, Mrs. Yukino just reminded me to beware of Namikaze Yukaku eavesdropping.
He closed the door gently again.
He took out his cell phone and called Todo Xiangcheng.
Toudo Xiangcheng quickly answered the phone, obviously playing with his mobile phone: "Moxi Moxi? Mr. Oda, is there any urgent public opinion? I will send a hundred thousand navy to handle it!"
She spoke in a loud voice, full of energy.
Of course, Oda Shingo couldn't ask for advice from a fool: "Um... are you free? Can I come over and have a chat?"
"..." Todo Xiangcheng's phone suddenly became quiet.
But Oda Shingo could clearly hear nervous breathing in the microphone.
After a long while, Todo's weak voice like a mosquito came from the microphone: "You have to sign the marriage contract..."
Marriage certificate is a document that Japanese citizens submit to the civil affairs ward office to apply for marriage.
Oda Shingo: "..."
(End of chapter)