Chapter 143 Shiori’s trance
"That's probably what it means."
At the dinner table, Haruno Sawayama had already finished everything he wanted to ask Mine Shiori to do.
After taking out his cell phone, he looked at the other party with a hint of solicitude.
"Refinement inspection?"
Sensing Sawayama Haruno's unabashed gaze, Mine Shiori's face became slightly troubled.
She whispered: "Although I read a lot of literary works, I can't guarantee how profound my insights will be in this area."
"It's better than what I understood when I was rushing to make progress, right?" Haruno Sawayama looked at her helplessly and whispered, "I have to finish all the manuscripts in the next week, but I can't go to school normally. I can’t refuse other social activities, so it’s hard to spare more time to check again.”
"Is this so"
Feng Shizhi was a little confused.
What the other party said makes sense.
After all, how can you write a book without checking it? Moreover, you are not writing a light novel, but now you are writing a literary work. Going back, checking and refining is something that almost every writer will do.
If it was to catch up with the schedule, it would be difficult for Haruno Sawayama to spare extra time. After all, checking requires more effort than coding.
The inspection requires you to carefully read word by word, and you also have to think about the appropriateness of the words, which can be said to be very troublesome.
After all, ordinary readers only need to read it thoroughly, but for writers who want to be published, even the slightest flaw cannot be tolerated.
Feeling Sawayama Haruno's slightly expectant gaze, Feng Shiori's heart softened a lot.
In addition, she has been deliberately working hard in this area recently.
It doesn’t seem impossible, right?
"I, I know."
In the end, Mine Shiori bravely agreed: "Then I will help Haruno take a look, but I can't guarantee how far I can check it."
Woo.
She felt really unsure because she had been too busy recently.
I have to take care of my own university studies, I have to tutor Suguha, I have to prepare for my future major and employment direction, and now I have to help Haruno check novels.
Just thinking about it, I feel like I am being whipped constantly. That weird feeling of whipping yourself to work faster?
But this time I really couldn’t feel the pleasure. Feng Shiori couldn’t help but sigh slightly in her heart.
Hearing the petite girl's answer, Sawayama Haruno breathed a sigh of relief and said with a smile: "Just take a look, it will be a big help."
The most difficult part has now been solved. Next, he only needs to concentrate on updating the code.
"Haruno, do you have the document on your phone now?"
Feng Shizhi said weakly: "I want to take a look now."
Now that we have agreed, we might as well watch it earlier.
Anyway, she has been looking forward to the other party's works for a long time.
"Yes, yes, but the mobile phone seems a bit slow to send." Haruno Sawayama handed his mobile phone to the other party and said casually, "How many times do you use my mobile phone to check first? I will send it to you on the computer when I get back. May I?"
"That's no problem."
Feng Shiori carefully took the other party's phone.
The document inside has already been opened, and I thoughtfully entered the reading mode using other software.
The current word count seems to have reached half of the novel. Feng Shizhi glanced at the word count and it showed that it was about 110,000.
"It's amazing." She was shocked.
The other party's progress last week was only to a certain extent. Did he write so much in such a short period of time?
No wonder the other party is worried about his quality problems and wants to find someone to help check.
Normal writing can't be completed within a month, let alone two weeks.
Thinking of this, Feng Shiori swallowed and suddenly had no confidence in what Haruno Sawayama wrote.
Of course, it doesn't affect the continued reading, it's just a little worrying.
The title of the book was "Norwegian Wood", which she knew. Haruno Sawayama had told her about it before.
However, I have never heard him tell the content of the story. I only know what he said in advance when he visited his home last time.
From the analysis of that sentence, it is not difficult to see that it is a healing love work. In other words, the main tone should still be leaning towards the relaxed one, right?
With all kinds of thoughts, Feng Shiori started reading.
However, it didn't matter if she didn't look at it, but once she looked at it, she couldn't move her eyes away.
The time on the dining table began to pass little by little again, and the meals ordered by the three of them were already prepared and served.
However, Mine Shiori's mind was obviously not on the food she ordered. She clutched Sawayama Haruno's cell phone tightly and focused all her attention on the book. As for eating, she just absent-mindedly perfunctory it. A few mouthfuls.
I have to stare at that mobile phone while eating. Are the novels written by Haruno really so good?
Looking at Mine Shiori's appearance, Ayano Yui became a little suspicious.
She couldn't help feeling a little regretful. If she had known this, she should have sat next to her brother in the library just now, and maybe she could have secretly glanced at what he wrote.
Damn it, now this sneaky cat has taken the lead.
Unlike Yui Ayano, who was depressed, Haruno Sawayama seemed much more relaxed.
He just focused on eating. After all, he had been thinking all morning, and his body was still in urgent need of nutritional supplements. What's more, the food in this restaurant was indeed good, and at least he felt satisfied with the food.
After Sawayama Haruno and Ayano Yui both finished eating, they still couldn't take a few bites from the plate placed in front of Mine Shiori.
The petite girl was obviously addicted to the world of the novel. Even if Haruno Sawayama whispered a few words to her, she could only respond with "um" and "ah" and told Haruno not to worry about her.
Seeing this, Haruno Sawayama was helpless and had to call the waiter to take away all the plates that he and Ayano Yui had finished.
Then he waited patiently on the sidelines.
He had noticed just now that Feng Shiori was most likely in a state of speed reading, and it would not take much time to finish reading the 110,000 words.
If that's the case, let's wait until the other party has read it again before talking. He can still afford to wait for this time.
After about ten minutes, Feng Shizhi came back to his senses in a daze.
"Eh"
Looking at the empty seat next to her, she made a puzzled sound.
"Going to the bathroom."
Ayano Yui, who was sitting opposite, crossed her arms and said sadly, "I must have just been there not long ago."
"Ah sorry"
Looking at Haruno's sister who seemed very impatient, Feng Shiori opened her mouth and said a little embarrassedly: "I accidentally got addicted to it, I'm sorry."
(End of chapter)