What exactly did you write? This is really a good question. I just heard the system machine beeping, the manuscript was ejected, and bright red annotations were written on the black and white paper.
To be honest, the three people present were strangers to each other and had different personalities. They were suddenly brought together by the game. It was really damning if they had to write a story and study the plot carefully. They just pick up things that happen around them and write about them casually - people like them will always experience some strange things that others will never encounter in their lives.
It’s true that I wrote casually, but it took me three days to write. There was a pile of scrap paper on the ground. I wrote tens of thousands of words. I just stuffed it into the system according to the prompts. It broke the system. Didn't it take five minutes to get a failed result?
Even though he has a good temper, he can't help but feel a little annoyed. His fingers are knotted in his sleeves, and he feels aggrieved.
Li Mochou felt much better, especially when she discovered that the points she got could actually increase various physical values, such as internal strength, strength, agility, etc. She tried to use the points she just got All the hundred points were added to the internal strength. The moment after the addition, I felt a warm heat flowing into the limbs and finally into the Dantian. The fatigue of three days at the desk was immediately wiped away, and the whole person seemed to be reborn.
She was pleasantly surprised to feel this power. She was looking at the green grass and the fragrance of the flowers. Even the little man beating in the screen. Originally, Li Mochou had the heart to kill it with a knife, but now she felt that it was so small. A paper figure is quite cute jumping up and down. Just dust it with a whisk to sweep away the dust.
Don't tell me, don't tell me, if you can gain inner strength just by writing stories, it will be much faster than practicing hard by yourself!
Li Mochou feels that she can write another two million!
Chi Lian Fairy was in a good mood and did not forget to take care of her teammates. After all, the game said when she came in that three of them had to clear the level together before they could get out.
In addition, she was also curious. Looking at the handsome and elegant young man, how bad a story would he have to write to get six points?
Li Mochou picked up the article "The Battle at the Top of the Forbidden City". Just by looking at the title, she imagined a bloody story.
“Could this be a story about two people with a blood feud who were still upset after killing each other’s whole family, and then met for a decisive battle?
Waiting for one to defeat the other, just in time When she was about to kill him, someone jumped out and shouted, "You can't kill him, he is actually your biological father!"
With such expectation, she read on.
“In the Mid-Autumn Festival in August, the roses and osmanthus compete with each other, the banks of the south of the Yangtze River are full of tourists, tea fights and various games are played, and naughty boys are busy fluttering butterflies...”
The beginning is quite satisfactory, but at a glance, there are more than 800 words about Jiangnan scenery, more than 500 words about seasonal flowers, and then the pen turns around, and more than 1,800 words grandly introduce the major families and gangs in the entire world, with their names. , such as someone , so-and-so...
Li Mochou frowned and quickly flipped through three or four pages. She couldn't find the names of the two people in the decisive battle or what they were talking about. However, she did know the so-called "Purple" "Forbidden Peak" is the highest roof in the palace.
On the roof... He didn't mention it, but Li Mochou was still wondering which famous mountain or river it was. But it was all right, why should the duel take place on the roof of the palace?
She turned back three or four pages without mentioning it.
After five or six pages, thank God, the names of the two protagonists who are about to duel finally come out! As for why the duel? After flipping through another seven or eight pages, I found:
"Both of them are masters of swordsmanship. There is no grudge between them. It's just that they know in their hearts that this duel must go on! No one or anything can stop it."
No, Li Mochou I don’t understand why it’s necessary to have a duel? Why can't it be stopped? You wrote this clearly!
She turned to the end in one breath and was so angry at the ending that her eyes darkened!
A script of 40,000 to 50,000 words! It stands to reason that the two people in the decisive battle are the protagonists, right? This duel is the highlight, right? As a result, she knew all the delicious pastries in Jiangnan, which made her quite greedy, but she didn’t even remember the names of the two protagonists until the last page!
What's even more annoying is that after a lot of messing around, I finally saw the decisive battle coming. From the two swordsmen pulling out their swords to one of them falling, it only took two! ten! indivual! Character!
That's right, Li Mochou counted them word by word. He wrote the so-called decisive battle at the top of the Forbidden City in twenty words! over! Got it!
Twenty words, she read it three or four times before she could figure out who the winner was, and the ending was even more terrifyingly scrawled:
“He hugged the enemy’s body and disappeared into the morning mist. "
Li Mochou: "..."
Yeah, six points is too much!
She took two deep breaths, put down "The Battle at the Forbidden City", and turned around to pick up "Golden Wind and Drizzle". As soon as she put it down, Lei Chun picked it up. She had already finished reading it. The book "Games Kill the Whole Family", knowing that Hua Manlou's eyesight was inconvenient, I read it to him softly.
Li Mochou didn't hesitate and let her read. When Lei Chun was planning to see the top of the Forbidden City, he reminded her carefully: "The first three pages are all nonsense. Just read the last three pages."
Lei Chun smiled at her, but saw her picking up the "Golden Wind and Drizzle" she wrote, her cheeks slightly red.
Li Mochou didn't know why, so she looked at everything at a glance.
The plot is simple and ordinary. It tells the story of a young man inheriting a gang organization from his father and slowly developing it.
The young man had been engaged since childhood, and he and his fiancée were childhood sweethearts. But at this time, something heartbreaking happened to the reader.
The young man’s fiancée was blocked in an alley and raped!
"The cold moonlight seemed to have covered the earth with a layer of white frost. The moment her clothes were torn to pieces, the girl felt like she had fallen into ice and snow..."
The story ends here, there is no The ending, and the ink at the end of the story is the thickest, almost protruding from the paper. It is obvious that the person who wrote this story hesitated a lot. Li Mochou suddenly remembered that Lei Chun seemed to have announced that he had finished writing it long ago.
She did not want to write that ending on purpose.
Li Mochou's face was livid. She glanced at the manuscript and then at Lei Chun - she was just a girl in her early twenties. She was stunningly beautiful and had an indifferent and cold temperament. This kind of "coldness" was not expressive. On her face, she always smiled when she spoke, but she was cold in her bones, as if it was difficult to experience the many emotions in this world. This suddenly reminded Li Mochou that his junior sister who had lived in the ancient tomb for a long time was also so cold and indifferent, but she was not as smiling.
"Why don't you continue writing? Your story is very good. If you finish it, you won't get more than thirty points." Li Mochou sighed, His voice softened, and he was a little sad: "Actually, I know what the ending will be even if you don't write it. The girl lost her virginity, and her fiance is How can you still want her if you are a good person?"
Lei Chun shook his head: "That's not the case."
She took the stack of manuscripts back and balled up the last two pages. , crushed it into pieces in the palm of his hand, and said slowly: "No matter whether that night happened or not, they will never be together."
"Oh?"
Lei Chun smiled faintly: "The ending is that he killed his fiancée's father, so of course he can't marry her again."
Li Mochou also smiled: "So it turns out that he can't marry her again." It’s just that the father is dead, that’s okay. As long as two people really love each other, what does it matter if they are just dead?”
Lei Chun: “…”
That’s a big deal. Got it!
As if he was mocking himself, Lei Chun's smile became a little sad: "How can he really want to marry, and how can the woman really want to marry? It's just a game between these two forces. The world is originally a struggle for power between men. How can there be room for true love in this place?"
Li Mochou rolled her eyes at her. : "Listen to your fart."
Huamanlou sighed: "Girls really shouldn't be involved in such a dangerous place. They should be in a small courtyard full of flowers, with a close confidant. My husband, and..." Before he could finish a sentence, he felt keenly the coolness of two white eyes scratching him.
He shut his mouth wisely.
……
The clearance place for the Miaobi Shenghua trio is probably one of the most comfortable environments among all teams.
They live in a completely modern house with three bedrooms, two living rooms, one kitchen and three bathrooms. All the things you need every day can be found inside. Not only will three meals a day appear in the kitchen on time, but some snacks will occasionally be dropped in the workroom, such as sweet fruit tea, various preserves, colorful candies... Not only is there everything you need to eat and drink, but you can see the vast ocean when you open the window. Apart from being unable to get out, there is really nothing to fault about staying here.
After having a quick bite, the game quickly released a new mission.
“Write a story with the theme of love and hate, word count required: more than 600,000, time required: thirty days, reward for completing the task: one thousand points, and you can extract skills once.”
As soon as the task was released, Hua Manlou let out a long sigh. Lei Chun's eyes fell into the distance, and he didn't know what he was thinking. Only Li Mochou was gearing up, and her fingers clenched.
She sorted out the manuscript paper and suddenly said: "I have an idea. Since this story has 600,000 words, if we each write our own thing, it will probably be difficult to finish it in thirty days. How about we cooperate?" < br>
Lei Chundao: "How to cooperate?"
Li Mochou said: "I will tell the general story, Miss Lei, you can sort out the context, and Mr. Hua, you can polish it up, okay? ”
Of course there is nothing wrong with it.
Hua Manlou was already grinding ink and laying paper. He smiled and said warmly: "I think Miss Li is very confident. I am listening attentively."
Li Mochou said: "Isn't this easy? I think it would be good to put together the stories you two wrote before."
"The names of the people are all ready-made, so let's write about Ximen Chuixue's victory on the top of the Forbidden City. Later, he accidentally discovered that his wife had cheated on her and had been hooking up with Su Mengzhen for a long time. They formed an adulterer, and even the child was Su Mengzhen’s son. Ximen Chuixue felt deeply ashamed. He raised his sword and was about to kill the adulterer and adulteress, but he fell in love with her on the way..."
She saw After watching "Golden Wind and Drizzle", I found that the poor fiancée didn't even leave her name, so I had to After searching for a long time, Li Mochou's eyes lit up: "I fell in love with Lu Xiaofeng! But he didn't know that although Lu Xiaofeng was Su Mengzhen's fiancée, she had already been in love with Ye Gucheng. She has been in love for a long time. She originally hooked up with Ximen Chuixue just to avenge Ye Gucheng. !"
"While several people were entangled in their grudges, Lu Xiaofeng suddenly discovered that she was pregnant. At this time, Bai Choufei suddenly stood up and told everyone that the child was his! "
< br>“What do you think?”
(End of this chapter)
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