Both Hua Manlou and Lei Chun looked like they had been struck repeatedly by thunder. The expressions on their faces were so complicated that they were difficult to describe in words.
Li Mochou obviously didn't understand what was going on. She looked them both up and down. She held the whisk handle and turned it around. She said quietly: "Do you think this story frame is bad?"< br>
Looking at this posture, as long as she hears a word "no", she doesn't mind fighting on the spot.
The key is that this is not a question of whether it is good or not at all! But the people in the story were actually people they knew!
Lei Chun thought for a moment along the story framework given by Li Mochou. Su Mengzhen seduced other people’s wives and committed adultery... Su Mengzhen seduced other people’s wives... He seduced... Hahahahaha , Lei Chun really couldn't hold it back, covering his face and laughing sullenly.
Who is Su Mengzhen? He was plagued by seven or eight kinds of injuries and illnesses, and his aloof demeanor still frightened the hero. Everyone said that people with that kind of terminal illness would not live long, but he survived. Not only did he survive, but he also developed an extremely powerful body. With his powerful martial arts, he developed and expanded the power left by his father. After the battle with Liufenbantang, he became the leader of the black and white factions in the capital.
How can a person like him have any love in his heart? Still with someone else's wife... No, Lei Chun couldn't think about it any more. If she thought about it any more, she would laugh to death from this weird plot.
Intrigued by Lei Chun's smile, Hua Manlou didn't hold back. He tilted his head and covered his forehead with his hands, his shoulders shaking uncontrollably. In fact, he could have controlled it, but Lu Xiaofeng - of course Hua Manlou had to admit that the name did sound a bit like a girl, but everyone who knew Lu Xiaofeng knew that he was an out-and-out man!
Is he engaged to another man? Was he originally Ye Gucheng's lover? He also seduced Ximen Chuixue in order to avenge Ye Gucheng? In the end, she was inexplicably pregnant with her fiancé’s brother’s child?
Hahahahaha, if you tell me, no one will believe it, and they might even laugh out loud.
Of course, Huamanlou could have regarded the protagonist of this story as a girl with the same name, but the problem is that he and Lu Xiaofeng are too familiar! He was so familiar with it that when he mentioned the name, the hearty laughter and the legendary four eyebrows suddenly came into his mind, and were written into the story and seamlessly substituted. Who can resist laughing?
You know, the most taboo thing is to hold back laughter. The more you try to hold it back, the easier it is to laugh out loud. So Lei Chun and Hua Manlou were grinding and laying paper. As I started to write, my hand couldn't help trembling, thick ink dripped on the paper, and I laughed so hard.
Li Mochou was confused by the laughter of the two of them: "What's wrong?"
Lei Chun waved his hand towards her, wiped away the tears from the corners of his eyes, Hua Manlou held her hand on her On his forehead, he tried his best to control his breathing.
Seeing that the two of them could not write anything, Li Mochou suddenly felt blessed and understood.
"This story originally happened around you, didn't it? It's just that you deliberately concealed your names when you wrote it."
She glanced at the book Top of the Forbidden City: " The playboy must have heard this story from a friend, so it ended hastily at a crucial point. , As for Miss Lei, she must be..."
Lei Chunqing coughed, interrupting Li Mochou's words, then smiled apologetically at her, tapped her fingers on the table, and said slowly: "I Suddenly I felt that it would save energy to use the people around me as the characters in the story, because of their appearance, age, and so on. Age, personality and even experience are all ready-made, just copy them over and write them. If you want to think of a new one by yourself, it will take a lot of time."
"We don't have much time, Six. A project of more than 100,000 words must be completed within thirty days. Including the completion of the manuscript, it is inevitable to make a new copy. Time is even tighter. Calculated, we have to write at least 20,000 words a day.”
This does not include the time for conception. Just writing word by word will make us busy from morning to night. , it can be said that time is tight and the tasks are heavy. At this time, I can only say sorry to my friends who are far away.
Lei Chun took the lead in writing, and the name for the first chapter was already chosen.
"The little phoenix and the mandarin ducks are of the same mind, and the wise sword god catches adultery at night on the top of the Forbidden City."
"Not bad." Li Mochou nodded and said: "I know a Qiao sect, those If a storyteller wants his book to sell well, he must write some obscene and obscene things at the beginning to attract attention. Although I have not seen it with my own eyes, when I travel around the world, if I have seen it, If any storytelling place is crowded, you know that the storyteller must have said something unpleasant."
Lei Chun said repeatedly: "That's why my father never allowed me to go there. In those places, they are afraid that I will hear something scandalous."
After finishing speaking, the two women looked at Huamanlou with smiles on their faces.
Hua Manlou opened a pair of confused and empty eyes, blinking again and again, blinking again.
Seeing that he still didn't understand, Li Mochou simply said: "Young Master Hua, Miss Lei and I are both women, how can we write such...such...so, such a paragraph is Sorry, dude."
When Hua Manlou learned the title of the first chapter, the tea he drank almost spurted out of his nose.
"Actually..." Hua Manlou coughed for a long time and hesitated: "This Lu Xiaofeng is a friend of mine."
"Oh."
"He is a man!"
"Oh?"
Li Mochou's eyes flashed: "Since he is a man, why is he called Lu Xiaofeng? Why isn't he called Lu Dalong?"
How do you know about this flower house? He didn't come up with the name!
Li Mochou thought for a while and said: "Forget it, then I won't give him the role of fiancée, why not..." She said it was better, but her eyes were already looking at Lei Chun, Lei Chun He immediately said: "What does it matter if he is a man!"
She didn't want to be written into that kind of story, not even a part of it! That's it for other characters. This is a huge shit basin. If you can blame it on others, just blame it on others. She immediately started to argue, her mind was spinning so fast!
“Can’t men get engaged to men? Can’t men sleep with men? Can’t men seduce other men? Who rules? I think that men like Su Mengzhen , if you need a fiancée, it must be Lu Xiaofeng!”
“Don’t you think, In this wonderful story, it is much more interesting for a man to do these things than for a woman to do these things?”
Li Mochou was convinced, because she had never seen this scene before. If someone told her such a story, she would definitely buy the storybook and read it to open her eyes.
I don’t know whether her horizons have been opened or not, but Hua Man Lou has really opened her horizons.
"The first chapter is particularly important. Instead of making a fool of ourselves in the opening poem, it is better to quote the poem "Yanqiu Ci"." Li Mochou wrote:
"Ask what love is in the world. Zhijiao lives and dies? Flying together, the old wings return to the cold and heat several times. Joy is fun, parting is painful..." Lei Chun's era had not yet written this poem. She seemed to be touched, and she immediately moved her pen, swissing a few times, the first line. The context of one episode is revealed.
[...It is said that on the eve of that unprecedented decisive battle at the top of the Forbidden City, a man wearing a heavy cloak, covering his figure and face, quietly came to the Forbidden City. In the northwest corner, he opened the door. The candlelight was dim, and Ye Gucheng was sleeping on the bed holding his sword.
Seeing someone coming, he opened his eyes. Although the person's face was covered, he still recognized him.
"You're coming."
"I'm coming."
"You shouldn't be coming."
"I have to come!"
The cloak fell to the ground, and it turned out to be the fiancee of the owner of Jinfeng Xiaoyu Building.
Many people are wondering, why would Su Mengzhen accept a man as his fiancée? Even if it is a marriage, when you find out that the other person is a man, you should break off the engagement. Especially, the power in his fiancée's family is incompatible with his, and sooner or later they will have to live and die.
Why is Mr. Su so confused?
But when the man under the cloak reveals his face, no one will have such doubts, because he is really...]
Writing this, Lei Chun looked at Huamanlou : "I wonder what your friend is like?"
Hua Manlou drank a cup of tea silently and said, "Miss Lei is just leaving it empty. Just wait for me to make up for it when I polish it."
Lei Chun continued to write.
[With his appearance, such family background, such wisdom and martial arts, falling in love with him has nothing to do with whether he is a boy or a girl. With his charm, falling in love with him is extremely normal. thing.
Of course Ye Gucheng is no exception.
They have been secretly communicating with each other for a long time, and they have taken the risk of meeting each other countless times like this.
The swordsman in white finally no longer hesitated, stepped forward slowly, and untied Lu Xiaofeng's clothes, his breath falling on his ears. Ye Gucheng said softly: "I know that you came to a place like this right now just to let me relax. Only when I relax can I win."
"You will definitely win."
In the darkness, two people hugged each other, but saw...]
Lei Chun stopped writing here very wisely, and left a paragraph for this paragraph A whole six pages - there are grids on the paper, one piece of paper, 350 grids, representing 350 words.
[Ye Gucheng loses. For a swordsman like him, losing means death.
When Lu Xiaofeng heard the news circulating in the streets and alleys, his heart felt cold and his body trembled like flames in the wind. He thought of that night again...]
Three more pages were left empty.
Li Mochou watched from the side, thinking about it, and added two more pages as appropriate.
[He didn't notice at all that Su Mengzhen had come behind him, gently put a big cloak on him, and said: "It's cold, don't blow in the wind, or you may freeze your body. ”
Lu Xiaofeng was sneering.
What’s the use of wearing thick clothes? The only love of his life has left him forever!
He swore that he would take revenge, he would take revenge! He wants Ximen Chuixue to die without a burial place! Let him also taste the pain he has endured!
Ximen Chuixue was indeed suffering. His pain was caused by his wife and the man standing behind Lu Xiaofeng.
On that night.
He saw it, and he saw it very clearly, looking at...]
Lei Chun thought, a little hesitant: "How much should be left here?"< br>
Li Mochou made a rough estimate and said: "The two of them are not at the center of the story, just three pages."
[Outside the window, there was lightning and thunder, and a heavy rainstorm.
The eyes of Ximen Chuixue were also like a storm. He pulled out the sword in his hand and said word by word: "Su Mengzhen, how dare you do this!"
"You insult her. , Just insult me! I will kill you this time!”]
At this point, the outline of the first chapter was finished, and they were handed over to Hua Manlou, and the two women smiled at him together.
"Next, it's hard work for the handsome man."
(End of this chapter)
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