Chapter 208 These two Gu Lu are not the same person!
“The author described in detail how poor Wei Er’s family was. The original work is in seven words [later declined and cannot be read], which is relatively concise.”
“The key is The author's writing is so smooth. "
[The remaining light in the sky has faded, the shadow of Nanshan has blurred, and the stars have appeared one by one... Year by year, Erxiao looks like an adult. , looks very delicate, but because the family is poor, we haven’t said goodbye yet. ]
There are no rare idioms or words. Not to mention how beautiful it is, the main thing is that it looks sincere and smooth.
In particular, because Liu Yong has been reviewing manuscripts for a long time, he will have a voice in his mind when he reads the book, which makes him read more smoothly.
With this opening chapter, Liu Yong was already looking forward to the following content. At the same time, he also had doubts about why the name of the protagonist in the original work was rewritten.
The original protagonist was named Wei Yunwang, but in the writing of the author Gu Lu, he became Wei Erxiao.
"Wei Erxiao should be a variant of Wei Xiaoer. The reason why he is not Xiaoer is because after all, the protagonist has studied for two years." Liu Yong made a thorough analysis.
In a short story, the characters of the main characters are blurred, for example, Neon likes A, B, and other alphabets, but in China, it is the second, the second, the third, the third, the fourth, and the fourth.
The essence is to make the protagonist represent "most people", or to strip away the sense of substitution, so that readers can see the story from a God's perspective without knowing what purpose the story is trying to achieve.
Continue reading, the following story line is the same as the original work. One night, Wei Erxiao saw a group of people. The two in front were maids holding double lamps, and behind them were scholars dressed in mink fur, silk and satin. , leading the beautiful girl, is a vixen.
The scholar said that his sister was destined to be Wei Erxiao. After saying this, without giving the protagonist any chance to react, he led the two maids away, leaving only his sister who was as beautiful as a fairy.
The girl Gu Xiao said: "You are not a person who sticks to your own abilities, how can you be generous?"
The translation of the original text is: "You are not a good scholar who chews books, how can you do it?" Will you feel frustrated and bookish? ”
The rewording is: "You don't read 'Confucius', why are you so bookish!"
Read it in conjunction with the smooth original text, it has a unique flavor.
Liu Yong found that this rewritten article was clearly set in ancient times, but the wording was very modern. The most important thing was that it was not inconsistent at all.
“You can’t get into People’s Literature just by writing.” Liu Yong thought to himself that literature always needs to have its core.
The original story of Shuang Deng is that he had trysts with the fox girl every night until half a year later, when Wei Yunwang was talking to his wife, the fox girl suddenly came to say goodbye. The reason was that "fate has its own destiny."
In the story "Liao Zhai", it is difficult for you to sum up what kind of story it is in one thought, or whether fate is destined to be determined by fate, or whether the fate between husband and wife is just right.
The version rewritten in the computer only made minimal changes, completely changing the core of the story.
First of all, the opening chapter was rewritten to say that Wei Erxiao did not say goodbye because of poverty. Secondly, although the reason why the fox girl left was also "the end of fate", this fate was no longer destined.
"What is fate?" "Fate is love" "I like you, and I'm here. I'm beginning to feel that I don't like you so much, and I have to leave." "Can you bear it?" I can't bear to leave you, but I have to leave. We, unlike you, can't make do with each other."
Small changes, the core of the story has completely changed.
A concise short story.
We are different from other people and cannot make do with each other. This is like a mouthful of chili pepper. Eating it alone makes you cough and is very hot. But when combined with condiments, it can be fried deliciously.
Condiments are rewritten from the previous article.
Liu Yong read it again, "It is different from Mr. Lu Xun's "New Stories", the changes are very small, the filling and description are rich in the story, the small changes change the core, and it is on everyone's level!"
Can't wait! Let's start reading the second part, because Ruiyun's story is very long, two or three times as many words as Shuang Deng's, and the plot is more twists and turns, so there can be more changes.
He first read Pu Songling's original work and then read the rewrite. After reading it, Liu Yong felt disappointed, but he could not help but sigh, "The ending of this rewrite of "Ruiyun" is really a masterpiece compared to the original work!"
The value of writing and articles themselves Yes, Liu Yong passed the test in both cases.
"The two articles should pass the final review." Because Liu Yong felt that he still had unfinished ideas and wanted to see what other Liaozhai stories could be rewritten, this feeling rarely appeared in his review career.
"The author is very familiar with "Strange Stories from a Chinese Studio". New wine is put in old bottles. Ruiyun and Shuangdeng are both injected with modern consciousness. Everyone, this is a everyone."
"Gu Lu—isn't this Gu Lu the famous genius writer?" Liu Yong suddenly thought of the author of "The Little Prince".
Of course he is familiar with it. The famous critic Yu Xinyao also specially reviewed this book in their newspaper "People's Literature".
It was Teacher Yu’s evaluation that made Liu Yong buy this book.
I have to say that "The Little Prince" is very well written. It can be said to be the ceiling of teenage thinking. Gu Lu is worthy of the name of genius.
"Impossible, absolutely impossible. Even if you are a genius, it will take more than ten years to achieve this level of fluency." Liu Yong had reason to suspect that a certain big shot was driving the vest.
And Gu Lu, who was suspected of being the boss's vest, was very miserable at this moment...
"Can you still move?" Lu Ping looked at Gu Lu who was lying on the ground.
"Have a rest...you can move after a while..." Gu Lu felt that his limbs were no longer his. The last time he felt this way, he had not eaten for four or five days.
Looking around, spring is coming soon, and the entire indoor stadium is full of people.
The instructor of the basketball club was very aggressive today. Except for sports students like Lu Ping, who usually trained very intensively, everyone else was on the sidelines.
"It's best not to lie down after exercising, just take a walk." Lu Ping said.
Bullshit! Gu Lu's body told himself that even if he died now, he couldn't move.
In the past two minutes or so, someone from the basketball club shouted, "The etiquette team is here."
The model etiquette team is basically all female classmates , it’s not that there are no men to sign up, but basically all of them failed like Dou Ke...
咻咻咻——
Gu Lu didn't know where the strength came from in his limbs, and they bounced off the ground in an instant.
Not only him, but also the members who were shouting just now stood up. What is the belief that supports them? Don't be embarrassed in front of strange female classmates!
“Zulu, do you want me to help you?” Lu Ping said immediately.
"Do I need it?" Gu Lu said righteously. He walked for a short distance and coughed twice, "Brother Flathead, I twisted my foot during exercise just now. You'd better help me."
Lu Ping didn't expose it and carried Gu Lu to the classroom, as did other club members.
Time has entered March, and the latest issue of "Science Fiction World" has been released. There is no article by Gu Lu in this issue, because this issue has a theme of popular science content.
Therefore, "Rural Teacher" submitted by Gu Lu was scheduled for the next issue...
(End of this chapter)